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Haiku´s encadenados

Discussion in 'Foro para Haiku, orígenes y derivados' started by cesarfco.cd, Nov 2, 2009. Replies: 7755 | Views: 255345

  1. crisantemo

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    Pasto de risas.

    En el prado beodo,

    un buey de Kobe.​
     
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    Un buey de Kobe
    consume el forraje;
    el sol a pleno
     
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    crisantemo Poeta fiel al portal

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    El Sol a pleno.

    Oscurece la vid

    las uvas negras.​
     
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    Las uvas negras
    relucen bajo el sol
    como tus ojos.
     
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    Como tus ojos
    en noches veraniegas
    brillan los astros
     
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    Brillan los astros

    entre ramas de sauce,

    ¡una luciérnaga!​
     
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    ¡Una luciérnaga!
    Estrella a ras del suelo
    que parpadea.
     
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    ¿Qué parpadea

    en el tallo del junco?

    croa la rana.​
     
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    Croa la rana,
    una brisa sutil,
    rizo en el agua.
     
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    Rizo en el agua,
    huyendo el renacuajo,
    mano pequeña.​
     
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    Mano pequeña
    removiendo la orilla,
    risa de niño.
     
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    Risa de niño
    en playa veraniega;
    madre vigila
     
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    Madre vigila,

    brincos a sus espaldas

    un cervatillo.​
     
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    Un cervatillo
    entre sombras de ramas.
    Lobo al acecho.
     
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    Lobo al acecho
    ladridos de pastor
    corral de cría​
     
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    Corral de cría
    olores peculiares,
    estercolero.
     
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    Estercolero
    donde el humo ciego
    mejor navega
     
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    Mejor navega
    la barca en agua calma,
    remo sin vela.
     
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    Remo sin vela
    entre los brazos fuertes;
    el mar verdoso
     
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    El mar verdoso,
    en sus profundidades
    crecen las algas.
     
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    Crecen las algas,

    temeroso flamenco,

    un solo pie.​
     
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    Un solo pie
    para saltar la comba,
    ríe la niña.
     
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    Ríe la niña
    bajo torrencial lluvia
    ¡sin su paraguas!
     
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    Sin su paraguas

    igual monje que buda.

    Lluvia de estío​
     
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    Lluvia de estío,
    chaparrón pasajero,
    vapor de agua.
     
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    Vapor de agua
    después de la tormenta;
    un arco iris
     
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    Un arco iris
    se forma tras el chorro
    de agua en la fuente.
     
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    De agua en la fuente

    se extraña el campesino.

    Estío seco.​
     
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    Estío seco.
    en el polvo se bañan
    los gorriones.
     
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    Un arco iris
    tierno, azulejado...
    ... tan indeciso...
     
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