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Haiku´s encadenados

Discussion in 'Foro para Haiku, orígenes y derivados' started by cesarfco.cd, Nov 2, 2009. Replies: 7754 | Views: 255074

  1. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Begonias blancas
    crecen en mata grande.
    Rondan abejas.
     
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    Funster cri_z

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    Rondan abejas.
    Polen a la colmena,
    dicta la reina.
     
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  3. Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano

    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Dicta la reina
    cortenle la cabeza!
    lee el abuelo.
     
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    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Lee el abuelo
    tebeos juveniles.
    Mira dibujos.
     
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    Cirhian Poeta fiel al portal

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    "Mira dibujos"
    dice cuando la niña
    pide jugar.​
     
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    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Pide jugar
    el niño con el perro.
    Perro con pulgas.
     
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    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Perro con pulgas
    detrás del vagabundo
    comparten penas.
     
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    Funster cri_z

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    Comparten penas.
    Misma melancolía.
    El tiempo pasa.
     
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  9. Zulma Martínez

    Zulma Martínez Mar azul...

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    El tiempo pasa
    y en la feria del pueblo
    hay pocas ventas
     
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    Hay pocas ventas,
    el tiempo no acompaña,
    el mercadillo.
     
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    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    El mercadillo
    se mezclan los colores
    al aire libre.
     
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    Zulma Martínez Mar azul...

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    Al aire libre
    los niños de recreo;
    los barriletes
     
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    dragon_ecu Esporádico permanente

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    Los barriletes
    asemejan remiendos
    entre las nubes
     
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    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Entre las nubes
    va pasando un avión.
    Viento de cola.​
     
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    Funster cri_z

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    Viento de cola.
    Velocidad aumenta.
    Hay turbulencia.
     
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    Hay turbulencia,
    nubes amontonadas,
    oscuridad.
     
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    Zulma Martínez Mar azul...

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    Oscuridad
    relámpagos y truenos;
    niños no duermen
     
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    Niños no duermen,
    el cuento de las brujas
    ronda sus mentes.
     
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    Funster cri_z

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    Ronda sus mentes
    las lozanas ideas.
    Descubrimiento.
     
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    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Descubrimiento,
    pegada en el cristal
    la mariposa.
     
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    MASTER LY 22 Laly

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    La mariposa
    con polen en sus patas
    posa en la cala.
     
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    Posa en la cala
    su pesca el pescador.
    La barquichuela.
     
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    La barquichuela
    navega en el río;
    tarde tranquila
     
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    Tarde tranquila.
    Trinar a la distancia.
    Olor a leña.
     
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    Olor a leña,
    estan podando pinos.
    Suena la sierra.
     
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    Suena la sierra
    el eco de los cascos
    los bandoleros
     
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    Los bandoleros
    agrupados cabalgan.
    Ladran los perros.
     
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    Ladran los perros
    en la noche invernal
    presencia extraña.
     
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    Funster cri_z

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    Presencia extraña
    surge de las penumbras.
    El cuervo observa.
     
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    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    El cuervo observa
    desde lo alto del poste.
    Suelta un graznido.
     
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