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Chorusless song

Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by Marks, Aug 1, 2020. Replies: 8 | Views: 767

  1. Marks

    Marks Poeta fiel al portal

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    I am designing an up-to-date flat
    I am resigning myself to a home tour
    I am singing the pandemic's blues

    I am feeling the urge to be sensible
    I am trying to be analytical
    I am rolling with these warlike changes

    I am climbing my own simple words
    I am crossing the spirit of armageddon
    I am checking eschatology

    I am drifting through the current landmark
    I am writing this chorusless song
    I am versifying these lonely *I ams*

    I am honeymooning in Playboy magazine
    I am daydreaming about laptops and TVs
    I am cultivating a forced empathy

    I am assembling this new reality
    I am tightroping across the unseen enemy
    I am cheering from my balcony

    ... ...

    (Songlyrics / letras para una canciòn)

    Written: July - 08 - 2020
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    To be frank, I did not try to be creative...
    To be honest, there was neither outer inspiration nor inner inspiration...
    I did not feel motivated to do anything but just write these songlyrics.
    ______This *slight speeding up* song has no *chorus* (no hook, no bridge),...
    its verses crawl and crawl ... miles of global places.
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    IMAGE: Balcony with a statue of a boy on its balustrade, in Antwerp (Belgium)
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    Marks, Aug 1, 2020
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  2. Gustavo Cervantes

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    nice try...
    poetry is at most pretty much at any time..
    peace or war... happiness and self retreat.
     
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    Gustavo Cervantes, Aug 3, 2020
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  3. Marks

    Marks Poeta fiel al portal

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    Gracias por su comentario.
    Thank you for your comment.
    ... ... ...
     
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    Marks, Aug 3, 2020
  4. Azalea

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    Excelente!! Saludos, poetaMarks.
     
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    Azalea, Aug 21, 2020
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    Muchas Gracias, Azal.
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    Marks, Aug 23, 2020
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  6. Azalea

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    Con gusto, Marks. Saludos.
     
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    Azalea, Aug 23, 2020
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  7. Marks

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    Saludos, Azal.
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    Marks, Dec 8, 2020
  8. Guadalupe Cisneros-Villa

    Guadalupe Cisneros-Villa Dallas, Texas y Monterrey NL México

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    MAGNIFICENT!!! I think it works, great job

    Hugs and kisses in the distance,
     
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    Guadalupe Cisneros-Villa, Dec 8, 2020
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    Thank you - Gracias, Guadalupe Cisneros-Villa.
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