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Discussion in 'Foro para Haiku, orígenes y derivados' started by emivargas, Jun 13, 2021. Replies: 10 | Views: 701

  1. emivargas

    emivargas Poeta asiduo al portal

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    Llegó el verano;
    las aves migratorias
    cubren el cielo.
     
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    emivargas, Jun 13, 2021
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    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Generaliza, amigo Emi, podría ser calificado de hokku.

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    fabiolaselene Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Lindas y cortas letras me pones en mi camino
    Gracias
    Un saludo
     
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    emivargas Poeta asiduo al portal

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    Gracias amigo Maramin.
     
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    emivargas, Jun 14, 2021
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    Gracias amiga fabiolaselene.
     
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    emivargas, Jun 14, 2021
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    LUZYABSENTA Moder Surrealistas, Microprosas.Miembro del Jurado Staff Member Moderadores

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    Estacionalidad de esa vision que se cubre en la mirada del vuelo estacional.
    una imagen detenida en la sensible belleza del acto natural. me gusto.
    saludos de luzyabsenta
     
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    LUZYABSENTA, Jun 15, 2021
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    Gracias LUZYABSENTA.
     
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    Has pintado un bello e intenso ritual. Tus versos transmiten fielmente la algarabía de esas aves y las del espectador. Precioso Emi. Un abrazo.
     
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    Gracia MASTER LY 22.
     
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    emivargas, Jun 16, 2021
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    María Baena Miembro del Jurado Staff Member Miembro del JURADO DE LA MUSA

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    Una estampa preciosa, un bello Hokku. Un abrazo Emi. Un abrazo
     
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    Gracias María Baena.
    Un fuerte abrazo.
     
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