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Discussion in 'Foro para Haiku, orígenes y derivados' started by emivargas, Jun 17, 2021. Replies: 10 | Views: 832

  1. emivargas

    emivargas Poeta asiduo al portal

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    Cantan los pájaros
    en los campos floridos.
    Un perro ladra.
     
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    emivargas, Jun 17, 2021
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    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Generaliza sin kigo definido, podría ser un hokku en todo caso. Tampoco el título ayuda.

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    Maramin, Jun 17, 2021
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    Gracias amigo.
     
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    emivargas, Jun 18, 2021
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    bristy Miembro del Jurado Staff Member Miembro del JURADO DE LA MUSA

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    Buen hokku , un gusto leerle, saludos cordiales
     
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    bristy, Jun 23, 2021
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    Gracias bristy por tu comentario.
     
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    emivargas, Jun 23, 2021
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    María Baena Miembro del Jurado Staff Member Miembro del JURADO DE LA MUSA

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    Un bonito Hokku. Que tengas buen dia
     
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    María Baena, Jun 24, 2021
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    Gracias amiga.
     
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    emivargas, Jun 25, 2021
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    LUZYABSENTA Moder Surrealistas, Microprosas.Miembro del Jurado Staff Member Moderadores

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    Bella imagen donde las formalidades vitales dejan esa presencia observada.
    disfruté. saludos amables de luzyabsenta
     
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    LUZYABSENTA, Jun 30, 2021
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    Tu amabilidad en los comentarios es muy reconfortante, LUZYABSENTA.
    Gracias.
     
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    MASTER LY 22 Laly

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    Muy bonita imagen Emi donde la naturaleza se expresa con libre albedrío. Un abrazo.
     
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    Bendiciones MASTER LY 22.
    Un fuerte abrazo.
     
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