Leaning on a Spider Web

[Arana1006]

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Don’t want to walk across splintered glass
But not brave enough to believe in "No"
Desperate enough to risk the breakdown
I’ve seen your face before, and loved
It brought me joy
But your haunting eyes… Doubt
Do you hear it? The soft melody of today
Which torments the days ever after?
Words bombard my heart
Pour out of my eyes
Rain down my face
It can’t wash away the trust
How can I give it to you so freely?
It’s all like leaning on a spider web​

 

[Gustavo Cervantes]

jeje...
for whatever is worth..
your poem is more like a crying plea..
love is strange...

peace..

 

[Alexandro]

Hermoso poema, aunque no entendi muy bien la razon o el punto final del significado, lo siento. Me gustaria tener un punto de vista.

SAludos y abrazos

 

[Arana1006]

Yo, for some reason your coments always make me laugh! I have to say I enjoy it. Thanks for passing by.

 

[Arana1006]

Bueno Alexandro, Quieres una explicación? Este poema fue escrito en el mes de abril de este año. Estaba visitando a otro país y ahí conocí este hombre tan especial que no podía parar de caer en amor para el. Pero estaba muy enojada con mi mismo. ¿Como es que yo podía perder tanto control de mi corazón? ¿Como podía dar tanta confianza a este hombre que casi no conocí? Así yo sentí, como yo estaba acostando sobre una tela de araña. Tenía la potencial de sostenerme, ¿pero va hacerlo? Parecía imposible. Entonces en muy mal español, ahí esta mi explicación. Gracias Alexandro por preguntando.​

 

[lordtever]

desperate enough to risk the breakdown? damn girl nice, pretty nice

 

[Arana1006]

So glad you approve! Desperation is an incredible motivator. And the fuel of many poems. I am sure you agree with me there lordtever. Thanks for stopping by.

 

[carlic4houston]

I love your poetry, this specific poem has the ability to give us (the readers) those images to look across your feelings. The extense vocabulary and the proper use of words make of this poem a masterpiece.

Congratulations,


Carli

 

[Arana1006]

Thanks Carli. I feel honored by your comment. Now we are just waiting to see you share a poem with us in english. You know you can, and we are all counting on it.

 

[BORRADO4]

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Don’t want to walk across splintered glass
But not brave enough to believe in "No"
Desperate enough to risk the breakdown
I’ve seen your face before, and loved
It brought me joy
But your haunting eyes… Doubt
Do you hear it? The soft melody of today
Which torments the days ever after?
Words bombard my heart
Pour out of my eyes
Rain down my face
It can’t wash away the trust
How can I give it to you so freely?
It’s all like leaning on a spider web​

danm i love it!!! It feels the need,the pain...but its worth it??
u let me thinkin..anyway very nice poem
you got a new fan lol lol lol
Kisses and 5 stars 4 u!!!::::::::::::