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Baby, please, stop loving me!

Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by lauflorcita, Jan 17, 2008. Replies: 15 | Views: 2035

  1. lauflorcita

    lauflorcita Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Maybe it’s too hard to say,
    perhaps it’s hard to understand,
    but baby I gonna tell you
    you’re making me bad, so bad.
    The shadows at night come to me,
    a ghost in the silence appears,
    and I can see his face
    and I can say his name, it’s you…

    Baby, please, stop loving me!
    Baby, please, you hurt me!
    I can’t be close to you
    because I see the truth.
    Baby, please, forget me!
    Find another one
    who can be by your side and hold you
    better than me.

    Some memories came back to my mind.
    Your eyes’re still staring at me.
    I don’t find a solution, it’s over…
    Just pray.

    Baby, please, stop loving me!
    Baby, please, you hurt me!
    I can’t be close to you
    because I see the truth.
    Baby, please, forget me!
    Find another one
    who can be by your side and hold you
    better than me.
    better than me.

    Maybe it’s too hard to say,
    perhaps it’s hard to understand,
    but baby I gonna tell you
    you’re making me bad, so bad.
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    (canción)


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    lauflorcita, Jan 17, 2008
  2. Tsadkiel

    Tsadkiel Poeta veterano en el portal

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    Its a beautiful song,


    five :::hug::: for you!
     
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    Tsadkiel, Jan 17, 2008
  3. Ricardo R. Ruiz

    Ricardo R. Ruiz Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    realmente hermoso poema...parece una cancion! solo una pequena observacion. En el tercer verso el verbo " I " debe ser seguido por " 'm " para que el verso pueda expresar una idea completa y logica..." I'm gonna tell you "
    fuera de esa infima observacion, el resto de la composicion esta padrisima! RRR
     
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    Ricardo R. Ruiz, Jan 17, 2008
  4. lauflorcita

    lauflorcita Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Thank you very much, dear friend
    It's nice to see you here.
    Kisses :::hug:::
     
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    lauflorcita, Jan 17, 2008
  5. lauflorcita

    lauflorcita Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Perhaps you're right Richard, I will look for some information about this grammar tip. Thank you for visiting my song. Kisses
     
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    lauflorcita, Jan 18, 2008
  6. lauflorcita

    lauflorcita Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    WELL, I 'M GOING TO TELL YOU THAT I'VE PUT MUSIC TO THESE LIRICS, BECAUSE I ALWAYS COMPOSE WITH MY GUITAR ON...
    THIS IS ONE OF THE SONGS THAT USES TO LIKE MOST.
    HUGS AND KISSES ANGEL
    THANK YOU FOR COMING.
     
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    lauflorcita, Jan 19, 2008
  7. Salvador Pliego

    Salvador Pliego Poeta veterano en el portal

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    Te luciste con estos versos. Requieren música para vibrar en ellos. Un fuerte abrazo.
     
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    Salvador Pliego, Jan 19, 2008
  8. ViajeroErrante

    ViajeroErrante Poeta recién llegado

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    bueno pero que bueno volverte a leer algo tuyo saludos de veras
     
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    ViajeroErrante, Jan 19, 2008
  9. PATY ALPUCHE

    PATY ALPUCHE Poeta veterano y reconocido en el portal.

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    Congratulations Lady En Rose,

    Un Enorme Gusto Leerte,como Siempre,poetisa
    Besos
     
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    PATY ALPUCHE, Jan 19, 2008
  10. lauflorcita

    lauflorcita Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    La musica la tienen, pero no la he puesto aquí.
    Muchas gracias por pasar, un abrazo
     
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    lauflorcita, Jan 19, 2008
  11. lauflorcita

    lauflorcita Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    gracias viajero..un beso :::hug:::
     
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    lauflorcita, Jan 29, 2008
  12. Sol Mircovich

    Sol Mircovich Moderadora del Taller de gramática/ Princesita de Moderador enseñante

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    It seems as a song...
    I think you have some mistakes with the tenses, but it's very nice..
     
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    Sol Mircovich, Jan 29, 2008
  13. lauflorcita

    lauflorcita Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Gracias Gen, este es uno de mis temas...tengo varios compuestos
    falto la musica jeje
    gracias por leerme
     
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    lauflorcita, Jan 30, 2008
  14. lauflorcita

    lauflorcita Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    iT'S A SONG, SOL...
    I WILL CHECK OUT THE TENSES...I PROMISE
    THANKS YOU FOR COMING...
    BYE BYE
     
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    lauflorcita, Feb 2, 2008
  15. elizuriel

    elizuriel Invitado

    Espero no sea tan malo...
    y q pueda resolverse...
    No me gusta leerte cuando estas mal...
    Pero me encanta siempre lo que escribes...
    Saludos y besitos dulce niña... D.T.B.
     
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    elizuriel, Feb 15, 2008
  16. lauflorcita

    lauflorcita Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Este es un tema que escribi hace muchos años...siempre mil veces agradecida por tu paso por aqui
    besos
     
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    lauflorcita, Feb 16, 2008

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