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Infinite things

Tema en 'La Torre de Babel' comenzado por lluvia, 20 de Febrero de 2008. Respuestas: 13 | Visitas: 1569

  1. lluvia

    lluvia Invitado

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    I rarely think of you, but when I do its usually the lack
    of things to do, and the monotony of staring at the wall, and
    hearing the tick-tock from a broken clock, broken
    like the dreams you let me believe where tangible, but
    I never did touch.

    You rarely think of me, but when you do its usually raining,
    and probably a regular day in the month of June,
    to not waste the other eleven months on tears and pain,
    and crashing thoughts of love, as you try to deny that these
    are infinite.

    I rarely think of me, but when I do its usually a random
    and vague reflexion about my many imperfections,
    and your preciseness to notice, and to digress upon
    a minimal one for days, it always results in tears.

    You always think of you, an when you don't its usually
    the sparkle in her eyes, that reminds you to think
    of you again, it always results in tears an pain,
    and crashing thoughts of love.

     
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  2. fatiga

    fatiga Poeta asiduo al portal

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    If he doesn't think of you, don't waste your time thinking of him... sometimes you just need to forget ando go on... you'll surely find someone who will really deserve you...

    Nice poem, full of fellings, though a little sad... it's been a pleasure reading you.
     
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  3. AnDreKo

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    Great, i loved this poem, its great and so is your style.

    Greetings
     
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  4. lluvia

    lluvia Invitado

    I think that is the smartest coment anyone has ever given me!:::sonreir1::: the thing is as you probably know it is not so easy to push something out of your head especially when no matter what (cagada) he does, he is the most beautifull thing ever....I guess we like to be treated bad...jojojo (amor apache)....muak! thank you for the visit.
     
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  5. lluvia

    lluvia Invitado

    Well Im great! what else can you expect! :::sonreir1::: (la soberbia) ....thank you for being you Risitas....muak!
     
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  6. Francisco Iván Pazualdo

    Francisco Iván Pazualdo Poeta veterano en el portal

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    I could understand all your poema but I ll say that is very sad and the same time amazing maybe someday you will finish ot think me I don t want that you live bad for me I apreciate you so much and I dont read englisg very well but es a perfect poem ojala pronto se borre tu tristeza no pude entender bien el poema pero hay cosas que son muy claras y tristes de recordar solo quiero que no olvides que te quiero mucho besos nena.
     
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  7. Liz Barrio

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    Deep in feelings, armonic verses.
    I did like them.
    Here are my stars and a kiss for you,:::hug:::
     
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  8. lluvia

    lluvia Invitado



    Gracias precioso...eres muy lindo, y siempre te lo eh dicho que eres una gran persona y jamas podria olvidar que me quieres. :::blush::: muak!
     
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  9. lluvia

    lluvia Invitado



    Thank you Baryshnikova, It is a pleasure to have you hear, and I do appreciate the stars and the kiss. Te mando uno para tras. muak!
     
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  10. Arana1006

    Arana1006 Poeta fiel al portal

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    So very heartfelt! With a dash of bitterness mixed together in a lovely flow of tears and poetic heartbreak. I truly am impressed with this wonderful poem. I am sorry it is of such a sad nature. Hope you are doing well and keeping your chin up, ok? Stars and hugs for you.
     
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  11. lluvia

    lluvia Invitado

    Ok miss Arana, I will try my best, visits like yours make it sound so easy, I wish it was...thank you for the stars, hugs back at you.
     
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  12. lluvia

    lluvia Invitado

    Gracias, linda- si que lo sos esa foto esta preciosa.:::blush:::
     
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  13. Sol Mircovich

    Sol Mircovich Moderadora del Taller de gramática/ Princesita de Moderador enseñante

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    You're showing sadness all the time... but your poem is actually beautiful...
    Thanks for share it,
    hugs!

    Sol.
     
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  14. lluvia

    lluvia Invitado

    Solcito! que placer tenerla por aqui. La realidad que mi vida esta mas llena de melancolia que de otra cosa...pero trato de sonreir...gracias por pasar. Un beso grande.
     
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