I am still here

I am still here
With my empty hands
With my lonely heart
With my broken feelings
With my whole body on the ground
I am still here
Asking myself:
Why did she leave me?
Where did she go?
What did I do to her?
Why is my heart bleeding?
I am still here
Calling you
Waiting for you…
Waiting for you to come back
And repair my life
I am still here
Walking to nowhere
Running to the starting line
Falling to the sky
Jumping into a hole of sadness
I am still here
Watching how the love dies
The end of a life
The beginning of the past
Watching my last step
I am still here
Asking myself:
Why do you kill me in that way?​

 

Sounds like a cruel reality, since we all most of the time end up right where we started, kinda sad since we spend most of the time trying to go somewhere (wherever) for my part far away from me....very sad, yet lovely poem, muak!

 

THANKS!! This poem was inspired by a real personal experience 10 years ago. And yes, it was really sad

 

The hardest realization is knowing you can't escape. You are still where you were left, hurt and wounded. A very nice poem, with such sadness. Thank you for sharing it with us. Take care.

 

Thanks for the comment, it's a pleasure to write for all you.

 

Uff un poema en ingles que bueno, porque mi preferencia es escribir en ingles, el poema esta melancolico pero chevere, mira esta pala bra "no were" quisistes decir "nowhere"? de ningun lado?

Hablamos

 

Gracias por tu comentario. Creo que lo que señalas es un error que cometí. No soy tan bueno para el ingles. Gracias por la corrección.

 

Oh.. Your poem shows sadness and emptiness... A will of love, of having that person with you.
I like reading it, thank you for share it!
Good luck,
cheers

Sol.

 

Thanks for the comment Sol. :::hug:::

 

so sad..it make me cry...is so hard when the love of your life realize that the things just dont go anywhere...
and u just stay there awaiting ....and keepin the hope...that maybe he/she came back...
welll beautiful and just touch me so hard lol lol
my pleasuare being here
kisses and 5 stars

 

Thanks Giuliana

 

Oh my god your poem is so sad but so beautiful. We have to learn how to let go a person and how to live with our selves when there is nobody there with us. But that is the cruel reality of love, one day you have someone by your side and the next day you are alone.
Great poem.

 

Gracias por la visita y por tu comentario.

 

Te voy a comentar en español por que asi me inspiro mejor. Sabes que aquella que tuvo la oportunidad de tener tu amor y no supo aprorvecharlo, en el fondo nunca te valoró, nunca se dio cuenta de lo mucho que perdió en su vida, por lo tanto no te merecia. Mereces en la vida mucho mas...y será lo que obtendrás.

Placer estar en tus poemas, Himinglaeva

 

Tienes mucha razón en tus palabras. Esto es algo que ya supere hace muchos años y en el camino descubrí que con una puerta cerrada se abrieron miles mas.
Gracias por tu comentario.