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A kiss is just a kiss

Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by Felipe Antonio Santorelli, May 31, 2008. Replies: 5 | Views: 1076

  1. Felipe Antonio Santorelli

    Felipe Antonio Santorelli Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    -But, it is just a kiss!

    A kiss is just a kiss;
    an overwhelming piece
    of very inspiring peace.

    A kiss is full of pleasures
    that has the greatest kindness
    to give the brightest madness
    of living among treasures.

    This kiss that makes me shine
    is surely the most divine
    event of my lifelong.
    Your kisses make me strong!

    A kiss is just a kiss?
    maybe it is
    a bit of sky at great full ease;
    a claim of stream
    that makes me dream;
    a link that freezes
    and makes me squeeze
    above your beauty;
    like it is a duty
    to love your world
    of songs and bells.
     
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  2. Arana1006

    Arana1006 Poeta fiel al portal

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    Mmmmm, such wonder there is in a kiss.
    So beautiful Felipe! This poem can only leave one with a smile. Very nice.
     
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  3. tristany

    tristany Invitado

    I am going to be your number one fan.
    Beautiful poem.
    Joan (T)
     
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  4. j. rafael garcia balcazar

    j. rafael garcia balcazar Poeta adicto al portal

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    your poetry is really very beatiful and you
    are right, a kiss is something that makes you dream,feel and hear wonderful things. congratulations by your inspired letters.
     
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  5. Princesa ciega

    Princesa ciega Respicere

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    I am surprised
    You are a great poet, as much in Spanish as in English.
    Your poetry is very beautiful, gentleman
    As subtle as the kisses that it describes.
    My greetings.​
     
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  6. RINOA

    RINOA EXPULSADA

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    Yey! that was very tasteful, I loved it from beginning to end,
    we knew you were good at spanish, but now you are even better at poetry, because you can also write in English!!
    Hugs, poet:::hug:::
    RINOA
     
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