My last word of sorrow

My last word of sorrow.

This sea is a reflexion of the night sky.
I can see in your eyes the sadness
this can´t be the end of happiness
I want to believe that is more to stay.

We can´t be crying en the purple land,
please my love I want to try again,
I don´t want a farewell whit in.
I just want kiss you again in the sand

Destroy my life in pieces of the night.
Your best wishes to my bleeding heart,
your curses to my perpetual pain
and your laughs to my last word of sorrow.

[COLOR=purple][I]You made to me a world in the land of hope[/I][/COLOR]
[FONT=Book Antiqua][COLOR=purple][I]and sang to me a song of eternal love[/I][/COLOR][/FONT]
[SIZE=3][FONT=Book Antiqua][COLOR=purple][I]but without a real meaning to believe;[/I][/COLOR][/FONT][/SIZE][FONT=Book Antiqua]
[SIZE=3][FONT=Book Antiqua][COLOR=purple][I]and now I can´t rescue this wasted part of my life.[/I][/COLOR][/FONT][/SIZE][FONT=Book Antiqua]
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[SIZE=3][FONT=Book Antiqua][COLOR=purple][I]In my lips the flavor of the venom of you[/I][/COLOR][/FONT][/SIZE][FONT=Book Antiqua]
[SIZE=3][FONT=Book Antiqua][COLOR=purple][I]my life is turn off and is because of you[/I][/COLOR][/FONT][/SIZE][FONT=Book Antiqua]
[SIZE=3][FONT=Book Antiqua][COLOR=purple][I]my dreams are nightmares after you[/I][/COLOR][/FONT][/SIZE][FONT=Book Antiqua]
[SIZE=3][FONT=Book Antiqua][COLOR=purple][I]and my last word of sorrow can be your name.[/I][/COLOR][/FONT][/SIZE][FONT=Book Antiqua]
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[SIZE=3][FONT=Book Antiqua][COLOR=purple][I]I don´t know where are you going now,[/I][/COLOR][/FONT][/SIZE][FONT=Book Antiqua]
[SIZE=3][FONT=Book Antiqua][COLOR=purple][I]in this moment I can´t see the pain in your eyes.[/I][/COLOR][/FONT][/SIZE][FONT=Book Antiqua]
[SIZE=3][FONT=Book Antiqua][COLOR=purple][I]So why can I believe in something better?[/I][/COLOR][/FONT][/SIZE][FONT=Book Antiqua]
[SIZE=3][FONT=Book Antiqua][COLOR=purple][I]If our world is down just like me.[/I][/COLOR][/FONT][/SIZE][FONT=Book Antiqua]
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[SIZE=3][FONT=Book Antiqua][COLOR=purple][I]My last word of sorrow is the scream?[/I][/COLOR][/FONT][/SIZE][FONT=Book Antiqua]
[SIZE=3][FONT=Book Antiqua][COLOR=purple][I]Is the little river of blood in my heart?[/I][/COLOR][/FONT][/SIZE][FONT=Book Antiqua]
[SIZE=3][FONT=Book Antiqua][COLOR=purple][I]Are your name, the stars, the roses and the sky?[/I][/COLOR][/FONT][/SIZE][FONT=Book Antiqua]
[SIZE=3][FONT=Book Antiqua][COLOR=purple][I]Love, is just love my last word of sorrow.[/I][/COLOR][/FONT][/SIZE][FONT=Book Antiqua]
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Is pretty good. I wonder why am I the first one in posting a comment? Is beautiful, but I think you need to read it again.

 

I think it too...
In a small re- reading in the "word" I find some words not good.
Thaks for coming... and abut everything for be the first.

 

My Dear Kinght of the inmortal fire.
Thanks for you sensibility to my words.
It´s good know that you are there reading and founding things that no body see in my pices of soul.
Everyday: Thanks for all.

 

Pretty girl... This is a wonderful poem,
it´s a pleasure coming to read
Kiss
:::hug:::

 

Thanks lady.
the pleasure is to me.