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In My Dreams

Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by Winterfairy, Dec 10, 2009. Replies: 6 | Views: 1107

  1. Winterfairy

    Winterfairy Poeta recién llegado

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    In My Dreams


    Tonight like every night
    I will see you in my dreams
    In that secret place reserved only for you


    Tonight I will feel your kiss upon my lips
    Your touch upon my skin
    And I will love you again, in my dreams


    In the middle of the night
    I will once again hear your voice
    And in my dreams I will fall in love…again


    When I close my eyes I dream of you
    I feel your caress in my heart
    And it almost feels as if you are here


    But then…cruel comes the morning
    And with the light of day
    Once again you go away


    Daylight steals you from me
    [COLOR=deepskyblue]I wake up to find an empty space by my side[/COLOR]
    [SIZE=3][COLOR=deepskyblue]I won’t despair for I know that tonight[/COLOR][/SIZE]
    [FONT=Tahoma][SIZE=3][COLOR=deepskyblue]Like every night[/COLOR][/SIZE]
    [FONT=Tahoma][SIZE=3][COLOR=deepskyblue]I will see you... in my dreams…[/COLOR][/SIZE][/FONT][/FONT]
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  2. c.eldrick driven-zavala

    c.eldrick driven-zavala Poeta recién llegado

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    Wow!

    The verses that you has expressed are marvelous,,,

    I have a problem with the poems in this language, because they never respected the metric, but their writing this well delimited,,,

    congratulations,,,

    Thanks by you're reading this,
    peace...
     
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  3. Winterfairy

    Winterfairy Poeta recién llegado

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    Thank you very much for your comments. I really appreciate them. Yo tambien soy de Puerto Rico, naci en New York pero me crié en Guayanilla:) Un honor que hayas leido mi humilde poema.
     
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  4. Pemberley Winter

    Pemberley Winter Poeta asiduo al portal

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    Winterfairy!, I'm glad you were able to post again so soon, and let me tell you that this poem is absolutley amazing. I enjoyed every word of it, and the way you express things with such an amazing flow of emotions is great. The theme is quite sad, but so believable, and that's why I loved it.
    Can't wait to read the next one!, Hope you can read some of mine in the Tower of Babel.
    Love, Pemb :)[/font]
     
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  5. lluviadeabril

    lluviadeabril lluvia & rain

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    Sweet, sweet poem.
     
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  6. Winterfairy

    Winterfairy Poeta recién llegado

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    I am so glad you liked it, believe it or not this poem just came to me in the middle of the night and it is based on reality:) Lost love, haven't seen him in over twenty years and all I have left is the memory of what once was. You never forget your first love:)
    Love, Winterfairy

     
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  7. Winterfairy

    Winterfairy Poeta recién llegado

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    Thank you so much for your comment:) A kiss and a hug from Winterfairy:::lengua1:::

     
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