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Knock' Me Down

Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by Pemberley Winter, Jan 5, 2010. Replies: 6 | Views: 952

  1. Pemberley Winter

    Pemberley Winter Poeta asiduo al portal

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    "Take my hand"- he said
    I was lost again.
    Fellings from the past appeared again.
    Tears of melancholy didn't dry.

    What I thought was over,
    Had just bloomed again,
    all the smiles, all the hugs, seemed to be decided to stay.

    I Think I'll let you free,
    I know you're nature, you're not for me.
    Would I ever learn this song?
    You are just not my love.

    That's what I want to believe,
    no air is left, I'll drown in here, I couldn't care less
    Even I still love you, you just have to blow away,
    Your sense is still here, cheat always stays.

    So the punch knocked me down again,
    I just left, I'll be sitting here,
    trying to not remember what you've meant
    The tears don't dry on my face.
    [COLOR=purple]I'll just die, and I couldn't care less.[/COLOR]

    [FONT=Microsoft Sans Serif][COLOR=purple]By Pemberley Winter [/COLOR]
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  2. lluviadeabril

    lluviadeabril lluvia & rain

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    Sweet feelings, written in the light of dismay - carrying a blinding punch, grasping the truth.

    ¡Congrats!
     
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  3. Pemberley Winter

    Pemberley Winter Poeta asiduo al portal

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    Thanks so much for your comment lluviadeabril, I have changed the stuff you told me!
    Thanks, Pemberley :::sorpresa1:::
     
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  4. Redwing

    Redwing Invitado

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    Love, sadness and suffer, life has too much of that, I wonder how you gilrs survive to all of those emotions, I... can not even think about that.
    If you love him... leave him and cry? nope, i think you should fight but...if at the same time it hurts... then you should leave him and move on... ok... I'm officialy confused :::eek:jos1:::.
    Pem, keep expressing it, it will help.
    Hugs.[/font][/font]
     
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  5. enriquebyron

    enriquebyron Poeta recién llegado

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    por lo poco
    que entiendi
    del poema
    excelente
    perdona mi mal ingles
    cuidate
    bye
     
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  6. Pemberley Winter

    Pemberley Winter Poeta asiduo al portal

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    Oh mennnn, you're a very funny person, did you know about that?, We survive because as you already said it: WE ARE GIRLS, its definetly in our nature, or maybe I believe that. We like to put sort of DRAMA to all crappy things like LOVE.
    Yeah, is quite complicated, I still don't know what the hell would I do but we'll see. Anyway....I just have notice...you are now a member of the jury?..I didn't know that!..hell yeahhhhhh, that's quite cool. let's get a little bit cuterrrrrr mann.
    Thanks for passing by
    Pemb :::sorpresa1:::
     
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  7. Pemberley Winter

    Pemberley Winter Poeta asiduo al portal

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    Gracias por pasar Enrique!, aprecio mucho que estes aqui, y que trates de entender esto.
    Love, Pembbbb :::sorpresa1:::
     
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