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Tema en 'La Torre de Babel' comenzado por Pemberley Winter, 13 de Enero de 2010. Respuestas: 6 | Visitas: 809

  1. Pemberley Winter

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    You try to make everything work,
    I say that's pointless...you're not my love.
    I believe you after all....
    No one says is forbidden to find a new "home".
    I'll give you a chance, great medicine to forget the past.

    I'll give you my life, my smile.
    I'll give you everything that I am...
    I'm sure this will work out.

    But I was wrong...the person is still waiting at the door..
    The other one, never left...
    is trying to make the horrible past blow away.
    He is trying to fix everything up....while now I'm here..
    saying "I like you" to other one

    And now I'm between two worlds...two loves....
    That they believe they deserve my hopes.

    The present isn't enough for me though.....
    Because the hurtful past is what I still love more.
    I might believe he has changed.
    I think I'll be ready to give him another chance.
    [COLOR=purple]But I'm still stuck with the damn "today"....[/COLOR]
    [FONT=Microsoft Sans Serif][COLOR=purple]'cause I got other one begging me to stay.[/COLOR]

    [FONT=Microsoft Sans Serif][COLOR=purple][B]By Pemberley Winter[/B] [/COLOR]
    [FONT=Microsoft Sans Serif][SIZE=1][COLOR=black][B]I know what you are....you're gonna be bad for my bussines...I can realize that.[/B][/COLOR][/SIZE]
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  2. cesarfco.cd

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    Living between two tides can cause endless setbacks and problems.

    Better to arm themselves with courage and sincerity.

    Good lines Pemberley. Thanks for sharing.
     
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  3. Pemberley Winter

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    Heyyy!..Thanks Cesar...I appreciate you beign here. Glad you passed by and you liked it.
    Keep it up.
    Pemb :::sorpresa1:::
     
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  4. Redwing

    Redwing Invitado

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    Stucked in the middle of two loves... ouch, that must hurt.
    Well girls and their emotional problems... you girls are fascinating specimens for my research of how to be a normal person :::sonreir1::: which I'm... still not (I'm learning I swear).
    Honestly i think you should only focus in your own feeelings, the one that must be happy is you even if it costs a little pain for both of them.
    I'm not best one to give advices but... something is something, and if that fails... call me in the morning (doctor lines I abducted for my personal joke). nah, seriously, if that fails... call meeeee and I'll be the third one... :SYeah, that was another not very funny joke, i know, i better stay quiet :::lengua1:::.
    A pleasure to read you twisty, sad, dark and complicated pem. :::hug:::[/font][/font][/font]
     
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  5. Pemberley Winter

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    OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH Redwinggggggggggg.yeahh weird creatures girls are! hahah..or maybe the things is that we are normal..you guys are the ones who make everything such complicated...you're the ones who make things twisty! hahhaa. Thank god I'll be having a friend like you giving me some companyyyy mennn! :::banana::: hahha. Anyway having a third one could possibly kill meeeeeee, I just have to fix this little detail. Keep It Up DARKWINGGGGGGGGG :::sorpresa1:::
     
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  6. RA

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    Dear friend,

    Quand tu es entre deux amours il est comme si tu étais entre deux langues. Je sais qu'il plaît à toi de 'écrire préférablement en anglais mais le français te plaît aussi.


    So you choose between the Englishman and the French man . I wish you luck.



    Congratulations, Pemberley, for daring to write so good poem.


    Fraternally,


    Ramiro[/font][/font][/font]
     
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  7. Pemberley Winter

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    hey Ramiro, yo are so right with this. I'm glad you understand what my writings says. Thanks for passing by!.
    Hugs, Pemb
     
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