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You Only Live Once

Tema en 'La Torre de Babel' comenzado por Pemberley Winter, 2 de Febrero de 2010. Respuestas: 2 | Visitas: 1022

  1. Pemberley Winter

    Pemberley Winter Poeta asiduo al portal

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    You only live once, so just clear things up.
    Let's talk about what you didn't say,
    Let's talk about what were you afraid,
    Let's talk why you didn't give me another chance.

    You only live once, so just look me in my eyes,
    tell me you didn't lie, tell me I was enough.
    Admit that you were the one who destroy all we had.

    You only live once, so make up of your mind,
    I'm almost ready to say goodbye,
    You only live once..so...are you ready to take my hand?.

    You only live once, and I don't want crappy things like that.
    I'm ready to locked the door, you won't be able to enter home.
    My heart won't give you space, you took it all, and left me without a chance.

    But then I remember that we live once,
    so now I'm ready to say goodbye,
    You wasted your time with bullshit like that,
    I'm going to walk in the road, trying to say 'I love you'
    to other boy.

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  2. RA

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    Dear friend Pemberley:
    In your poems you put the reader to think. And it is good that the reader be part of your poems. In this one, you are multifaceted : you look like a public prosecutor when you ask him to watch at your eyes and answer your questions; after that, you look like an enamored girl who wishes to give him another opportunity ; later, you become a furious woman who says bombastic words, and finally you realize that you also live once, so you decide to leave him and to love another boy. It is another one of your poems of love and disillusion but a beautiful and touching story. I liked your poem very much and I thank you for giving me the opportunity to congratúlate you again.
    Fraternally,
    Ramiro
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  3. Pemberley Winter

    Pemberley Winter Poeta asiduo al portal

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    My dearest Ramiro,
    Thank you so much for always passing bu, and of course to write your very sweet responses. i'm always glad that you passed by, and most of all...that you enjoy and understand a lot what my writing says.
    Keep it up my friend,
    Pemberley
     
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