I was a fool to believe...I've always been in the underworld

Let things in the past,
Something not so very fast.
For you it was like a pleasent relieve...
You weren't the one who were holding the tears.​

I was a fool to believe,
That something else might happened.
It all ends today, All I have to do is forget.​

At the end of the day he was right
I'm not for him....I feel miserable and sweet.
I'm not worth for anyone...it was just a mistake.​

I can't afford to love, I'm a creature from the underworld.
Yes, A place I guess very far and dark.
I'm sorry for wasting your time.
Even though for me was paradise.​

I shall return to my place, place where death approaches.
Place where I belong.
I was a fool to believe.
I was a fool to believe that for the first time...
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great lines.

 

Thank you, and of course let me give you the welcome to Mundo Poesia and also to my favourite forum: The Tower Of Babel. I'll be reading you
Pemb

 

Love is for everyone.

Even for those who have frozen soul.

Good lines Pemberley

Thanks for sharing.

A hug.

 

Thank you Cesar for giving me always your wise words!.Pemb

 

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Third verse, third word, i think you wanted to write "it was" but there, it says "is was".
Well after that correction i'll go straight to the comment.
Pemb... what's that about you can't afford to love? you're not worth for anyone? ok... i'm pissing off, that is not truth, i'm one of your friends and i like you and yes, you're worth of being loved.
Days happen, but they are just that and after them comes some others, maybe better, maybe worse, but pem... still you deserve to be loved, and if someday you need a hug... instead of one i'll give two or more.
Great poem, but please, smile more or i'll force you to.
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Pem -you've become one of my favorite poets - Can I share that I believe very deeply that every person you meet (good, bad or in between) can change your life forever. The same (more intensely) can be said about someone that touches the confines of your heart. I think that when you "feel" and "hope" and "dream" even if things don't quite turn out the way you'd like -having experienced those emotions has made those moments precious.

I love your poem and hope not to impose with my comment.

A warm hug Pem.

 

Dearest Redwing,
I couldn't be more pleased with your comment..which was very very sweet. hhahaa.. Yes...you're not the only one who tells me that I CAN afford to love....and I AM worth it. But you know...in this case I just wanted to show people like "I was the wrong one in this story".
You will force me to smile? that is soooooo sweet. maybe I'll smile for you. And thank God I have a caring friend like you.
Thanks for the correction...I will change it straightaway....it was a typing mistake of course!.
Loveeeeeeeee, Pemb

 

Dear Friend AprilRain,

Of Course you can tell everything openly to me. I'll be there...listening, bad stuff, good stuff.and other things!.. I am so thrilled with your comment saying that I'm one of your favourite poets. You will make me blush:::sonreir1:::.
Yes, you are right,....everyone leaves something in me....maybe a good stuff or bad...but they will be always in my memory-
Thank you for passing by and always been such a great company.
Pemb

 

How could you be a fool? When you say that you are not worth for anyone, oh my god how could you say that? I don’t really know you, but for the poems I had read you are a wonderful person and you deserve someone who loves you.
But it is a great poem full of sadness but still, it was beautiful
Hug and kisses :::hug::::::hug::::::hug:::

 

AWWWWWWWWW, Princesa, Thank you so so so much for your sweet comment. I really appreciated it. I know.....is like this time I tryed to make a poem of sadness but that refers to me, like I'm the one who is having "the problem". Thanks for passing by and for your beautiful words.
Kisses for you girrrrll!!!
Pemb