The Dark Advice

Light up the day and be yourself,
choose the best opportunity you have.
The images that happened in you head..
are useless..you just have to be yourself.

Live like the day is today,
Fight for what you want till' the end.
Pay attention anywhere you go.
Just be careful..be careful to fall in love.

Don't try to center in one objective,
don't try to feel fine.
It will be all an infatuation...later you'd realise.

There's no heaven, there's no earth.
Even if you want to deny it...everyone is by themselves,
This is a piece of my dark advice, that comes from my heart.
I know what is to fall, fall in his eyes.
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[FONT=Georgia][COLOR=purple]only one rule: never fall in love.[/COLOR]
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[FONT=Georgia][COLOR=#800080] Weeping and yelling will be your best friends, [/COLOR]
[FONT=Georgia][COLOR=#800080]I already told you..you'll always be by yourself.[/COLOR]
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[B][FONT=Georgia][SIZE=1][COLOR=black]I know what you are..You're gonna be bad for my bussines...I can realize that.[/COLOR][/SIZE][/FONT][/B][FONT=Georgia][/font][/font][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT]​

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Dearest Pemb,
There is a good advice in your first strophe and in the first three verses of the second strophe. It´s so clear, bright and good that everybody should follow it, including me. Obviously, your dark advice is "not to fall in love". Well, I respect your judgement but love has so many marvelous things... so, excuse me but I'd transgress your unique rule without any qualm of conscience.
In my opinion, the contrast between your first advice and the second one is what makes your poem beautiful. I liked your poem very much. As usual, add my congratulations to the others you're going to receive.
Fraternally,
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Kinda remind me to a poem i wrote long time ago while i was truly upset... you know? sometimes is good to write things like this, it helps us to let go somethings like anger, despair and all that crapy stuf that only give us headaches... sorry, i've talked too much.
Retaking, Yep, you'll always be by yourself... at least in some points, but for some others... you'll have some help from those who care for you (like me) Company and loneliness are just words, but neither of them are posible... i think.
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Ramiro,
Exactly what I tryed to do is exactly what you said. Making contrast was perfect and more useful to me, because then I could make clear my point of view. Thank you so much for being here.
Tons of hugs, Pemb

 

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Your comment was ful of wisdom...that made me realise how right you were. And how lucky I am to have a friend like you :::sonreir1:::. Maybe you just didn't feel it...but loneliness exist....the one who is trying to help will tell you that nobody is alone........but the one who is really suffering feels like he is.
Love, Pemb