Now that you left...

I have cried a river
but there is no coming back,
happiness left without a kiss
without a sad goodbye.

I have waited all night long
there is no us here anymore,
fool myself is what I do,
sitting here, searching for you.

Blame now, or do it tomorrow,
I am bleeding my feeling out,
you keep laughing as I suffer,
what to live for? theres no love.

Sky turns gray, cries like me,
look for me Im dying here,
take my eyes if you desire,
I lost all that I could see.
watch me die as days go by,
or come back and save me now.

 

Cuando nada queda, la espera se hace injustificada, sin sentido. Es entonces cuando creemos que el mundo se acaba. Síntomas del desamor.
Bellos versos Alma. Los he disfrutado.

Besos.

 

Gracias Cipres, sus comentarios son motivo de aliento y felicidad, gracias...

 

"Alma Ventura",
A sad but beautiful poem of love, or perhaps of lack of love. The writer's sadness is passed on to the reader and there it is the value of the poem. But hope is not lost at all, the boyfriend can return or the time will be in charge to heal the wounds. Very affective, stirring and frightening verses. Congratulations, you achieved your objective.
Fraternally,
Ramiro

 

Im really happy that you like my poem Ramiro,
hope we keep in touch... Alma M. Ventura.

 

What a wonderful piece of art!!! Is so sad but so beautiful at the same time, that I don’t even know what to say
You’re a great writer, hope I read you soon again
Hug and kisses :::hug::::::hug:::

 

Oh what a beautiful Poem you wrote!...I love your style....and it quite makes me remember about me, 'cause I often write abour how tragic love can be sometimes, and one poor sonet can kill it straightaway. I hope he returns.--if he doesn't....then he doesn't deserve you.
Hugs, Pemb

 

Thank you so much pemberly, with friends and comments like yours, who gets depressed?
I hope we become friends, hugs for you!!!

 

Thank you so much pemberly, with friends and comments like yours, who gets depressed?
I hope we become friends, hugs for you!!!

 

Fragilprincesa, es un placer que pases a leerme,
lo aprecio mucho,
hugs and kisses!