I Think Last Night...

I think last night you were moving in circles around me,
Telling me what I've done and what we couldn't fought for.
All the silent clouds changed into tears.
And the silence of my sight...was searching for a calm dawn.

I think last night, everything was wrong.
We thought we had it all, and we forgot about the tomorrow.
All in my head are the images.

Walking in this hall...I call you on the phone.
Let it stop, let the pain stop. I can't no more.
Last night was the end of which I thought would be the most neverending tale.
Something natural, something without explain.
I think last night...we made a mistake.

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[B]Pemberley Winter[/B]
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Dearest Pemb,
I must tell you again that I like your poems. In these verses there are beautiful images in which you let the reader make out them. For example I may say that you also were moving in circles: calling on the phone, walking in the hall, allowing the pain to stop; your weeping were the tears of the clouds. And as it happens frequently, we think that we even have everything until we come to understand that we were mistaken. Please receive all my stars. I’m glad that you’ve found the site where you can publish your poems, so we continue enjoying the reading of your verses.
Fraternally,
Ramiro

 

Dear Ramiro,
I really don't know how to thank you all your kind words and your beautiful and after all correct comprehension you've made. I offer you my congratulations and I thank for your stars, thank you so much for passing by!.
Love,
Pemb

 

“Live the today and not the tomorrow” my English teacher used to tell me that, is he right?? I don’t know but I always try to enjoy the moment without thinking of the consequences because sometimes doing wrong is the most wonderful thing we can do even though that tomorrow the pain would come.
Always a pleasure to read you Pem, you are an artist, you know that??
Hug and kisses :::hug::::::hug::::::hug:::

 

Thank you for the "artist" thing, I really appreciated coming from you friend!, You are very talented too, and your teacher's words are so true, we have to live the today---'cause life is too short...and thinking about the tomorrow......we'll forget what we are living at the moment.
Hugs girl!
Pemb

 

Love the images this poem brings to mind. You are wonderful at conjuring up images with your words. Great work my friend

 

Thanks for your comment Winterfairy!. I'm glad you passed bye. Keep it up. Pemb

 

The errors, if you can call it that, are experiences that lead us to a greater destiny.

Pemberly good lines. Thanks for sharing. A hug.

 

Thanks nicole for always writing to me......you understand a lot of my writings...yes.we are girl...carpe diem.....but of course we have to try it!

 

Thanks cesar.....for me is like you are a great guy with tons of wise words!:thanks so so much, hugs!.pemb