A New Halo

Everything is going straight,
It is also a weird sensation, something without sense.
Can the smiles float?,
Can everything be solved?​

I won't look back, The past is left behind,
Now is a new halo around you, or maybe it seems like that.
If I thought it was impossible...why now I believe?​

But I guess I shouldn't judge, i can let things fly.
You will prove me how you change,
How black turns to grey.
And then in one not so very special moment, you will stay.​

I'm not going to give myself false expectations,
I got tons of those.
I'll be waiting to see facts,
facts that could possibly tell me...that you'll be back.​

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Pemberley Winter
[COLOR=black]I Know what you are..You're gonna be bad for my bussines..I can realize that[/COLOR]​

 

If he has or not a new halo it doesn't matter, the important thing is exactly what you mentioned, to prove it with facts and not just words. And i have to tell you, tha about the false expectations... yes, perfectly done.
You have things clear in this poem and i liked that, i felt your strenght and that... is wonderful.
Hugs for you my dear and tons of kisses.

A pleasure to read you.

 

Mr.Darkneeeeeeess..how nice is to see youu! I missed you, Thanks for appearing and for your comment. And yes,,,,for trust again...you have to see..facts..I believe that's the only solution.
Kisses
,
Pemb

 

Excellent words my precious and dear friend. I agree everything should be proven not only by words and/or promises but with facts. Love is more than a four letter word and without trust all the love in the world is not enough. Excellent thoughts, receive all my love, my dear friend

 

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Heyyy winterfairyy!!.how nice is to see you again!, I hope everything is goign great, and I'm glad for your comment. When the trust is lost...the only thing that can save ir are facts.
love, pemb

 

that's right girl....FACTSS!!...they are the key of trust as well!..wish you luck my friend!: pemb

 

Dearest Pemb,
Saying that your poem is beautiful is a redundancy because they all are, including this. You know that I am a fervent admirer of what you write, prolific poet. Let’s go from the serious stuff to the less serious things: The FACT is that this ink which once was violet and which you write your poems is fading and if it continues that way it will turn up invisible. And if this happens, how I could be happy if I cannot read your next beautiful and invisible poems?
Fraternally,
Ramiro

 

Dear Ramiro;

I honestly couldn't stop laughin', 'cause you know...you're so right.....I really don't know why I change the color of the poem.....it's like almost invisible......but you know what?..I didn't change it....I guess It wasn't a big matter for me...but I'm sorry it was quite hard to read...next time...you bet it would be violet! aaahhah...and thanks for the comment..it show me how you read my poems...and you know the way you understand them...adn that you pay attention to them......
I'm always grateful for your sweet comment (as usual my friend). I'll be reading you...and I hope you have a wonderful day.
hugs,
Pemb