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The Dark

Tema en 'La Torre de Babel' comenzado por Pemberley Winter, 18 de Mayo de 2011. Respuestas: 6 | Visitas: 761

  1. Pemberley Winter

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    It is the way it seems
    Only by chance you can perhaps defeated it.
    It can follow you everywhere
    It can guide you to hell.


    Try to run, try to leave.
    Is late, you'll never be free.
    Keep asking why this is happening to you.
    You are the chosen one.
    The fate has picked you.


    Your most awful dreams come back,
    your shadows are gathering around.
    Hesitating to find a solution or just to let go.
    Yes, it's approaching, (watch out!),yes, it is close.


    Sink into it, die now.
    Believe me, you'll never survive.


    "Ubit sunt" is right, you know you'll ended up like that
    But you know is bad, when you don't go to "the above."

    You're not ready for the limbo, yes..you'll die, but not going there at all.
    Try to escape...'cause..well...you're going at the bottom of this page.
    You are going down..yes..you are going to the dark.


    Try to run, try to leave.
    Is late, you'll never be free.
    Keep asking why this is happening to you.
    You are the chosen one.
    The fate has picked you.


    Sweetest child of mine, you'll never come back,
    But for me is not a pity at all,
    I'm loving this moment, so please...
    Please..just go.


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  2. Redwing

    Redwing Invitado

    Holy mother of god! and i'm the one who's dark and weird? o_O come on, this sound cool and somehow funny...can i go to the dark? mmm... it makes me think of it as some kind of song... and yet, it gives me some adult thoughts XD never mind.

    Enjoyed, it was crazy, i liked it and still want to go to the dark ¬¬ tell me whereeeee cause i can only find absence of light, but not the true darkness itself.

    Hugs miss pemby twisted dark winter of the shadows XD
     
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  3. Pemberley Winter

    Pemberley Winter Poeta asiduo al portal

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    My Redwing a.k.a Darkwing hahahaha "holy mother of god". To be honest..I thought of you doing this, I knew you'll say something like that. So It is not a surprise to see your response. Yes. DARKNESS! Pretty interesting theme you know? I've always made sad things and so on..but I guess I neevr had the opportunity to do something like this. So...I enjoyed it too. Adult stuff?..hahahahah mmm perhaps... I shall tell you sth: I recorded my voice reading it..in fact. in the part it says ""yes it is close", I say it whispering...and I like the way it sounds...I wanted to put it on the forum of Los poemas recitados or sth like that..you know..you can read your own poem...but I'm such a dumb and I don't know how to do it hahahhaah...it is a pity...'cause I like the way it sounds. But it is already here. If you like, I could send you my voice so you can hear me reading it, leemme know.. Ok...I'm glaaaaaad to see you hereee! and yes..you'll always be darker than me..don't get jealous. And believe me...you shouldn't go to the dark...'cause you'll never survive. ;)
    tons of hugssssss.
    Pemb "Dark and Twisty" Winter.
     
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  4. Winterfairy

    Winterfairy Poeta recién llegado

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    Hi Pem,

    This is truly a dark and lovely poem at the same time. I really, really love it...darkness does sound interesting.

    Love,
    Winter
     
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  5. DEJAVU

    DEJAVU Poeta adicto al portal

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    Good write, has a lot of images. I can see in your writing that English is not your first language but it is definitely good work. Cheers
     
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  6. Pemberley Winter

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    Yes it sounds indeed! People tend to describe it as dangerous..and yes...of course it is..though sometimes, is the best place you could have ever gone ;)
     
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  7. Pemberley Winter

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    Thank you so much for stepping by. it's an honour.
    Have a nice day, Pemb
     
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