Feather

[Armonia]

Feather
​

Walk the wind
take your dream
silence sings
defeated sad memories.

But you, little bird in flight
do not miss the smile.

Flaps on the sidewalk
show your eyes to heaven
the sun keeps your words
darkness does not touch you.
​

 

[LuKaS]

Feather




Walk the wind
take your dream
silence sings
defeated sad memories.

But you, little bird in flight
do not miss the smile.

Flaps on the sidewalk
show your eyes to heaven
the sun keeps your words
darkness does not touch you.​

Enteremante sin desperdicio, pero destaco lo mejor.
Felicitaciones Isa, has logrado un poema hermoso.

 

[ALBUJA BRAVO GUILLERMO]

Feather





Walk the wind
take your dream
silence sings
defeated sad memories.

But you, little bird in flight
do not miss the smile.

Flaps on the sidewalk
show your eyes to heaven
the sun keeps your words
darkness does not touch you.
​

ARMONÍA

Versos con sonrisas que
salen de tu pluma
ensoñadora.

Abrazos y besos quiteños.
​

 

[Mary C. López]

I liked so much your lines... It´s beautiful.
Thanks, stars and kisses.

 

[amormejia]

The closing line make this awesome poem a work of art. Once again, you prove to the world the great talent you posses. My sincere congratulations from these, my California grounds.

 

[SMILEATER]

Feather




Walk the wind
take your dream
silence sings
defeated sad memories.

But you, little bird in flight
do not miss the smile.

Flaps on the sidewalk
show your eyes to heaven
the sun keeps your words
darkness does not touch you.
​

Softly and slowly
your poem falls on me, Armonie.


Glad I step by.




___________________________________ S.


PD: Look, there's a "smile" on this poem. ::::