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My kingdom beneath

Discussion in 'Poemas Generales' started by amormejia, Mar 19, 2012. Replies: 6 | Views: 535

  1. amormejia

    amormejia Poeta veterano en el portal

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    Beneath the kingdom of my soul,
    lays the heaven of your memories,

    that like thunder triggers my love,

    burning the frost of cruel sadness.


    Fragments that puzzle my heart,

    come together in one holly piece,

    one the mounts over the oceans,

    one the lives in unfertile grounds.


    Beneath ,the pain becomes less;

    sometimes the cold makes you sneeze,

    but the fire of your love,

    melts the iceberg that forbid.


    I run the race to glory,

    stepping over the green,

    leaving my feelings between,

    these lines that were born from within.

     
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  2. Armonia

    Armonia Poeta veterana

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    Solitude is lost
    arms in sea
    sadness and tears
    caress my words.

    No tengo palabras...
    Estrellitas armoniosas.
     
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    amormejia Poeta veterano en el portal

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    Me alegra que fuera de su agrado. Gracias por pasar.
     
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    Pemberley Winter Poeta asiduo al portal

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    Hey there, I really really loved it. I was able to see many many images in my head, it was a fine story full of beautiful descriptions of love. Congrats!
    Pemb
     
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  5. amormejia

    amormejia Poeta veterano en el portal

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    I'm honerd with your visit, sincre you're a regular in this foro. Thank you so much for leaving your comment. Greetings from California.
     
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  6. Guadalupe Cisneros-Villa

    Guadalupe Cisneros-Villa Dallas, Texas y Monterrey NL México Staff Member Moderadores

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    I understand perfectly that kingdom, I have tried to defect many time. (;

    From Dallas Texas hugs and kisses!
     
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    amormejia Poeta veterano en el portal

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    It´s truly an honor for me to find you in my humble English lines. Hugs and blessings from California.
     
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