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Today Is Raining Paradise

Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by carmina burana, Oct 14, 2013. Replies: 4 | Views: 857

  1. carmina burana

    carmina burana Poeta recién llegado

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    i'm ok , but I wish I don't have to dig for souvenirs,
    who'll write the unhappy events that happened,
    with a warning note, for me to read
    when I come back of be sleeping.


    Today is raining paradise,
    and I have to be awake,
    keep silent without replying;
    I have to dig, somewere else,
    I have to dig deeper.


    i'm ok , but i see my glass overflowing,
    my fuse is short, and
    you named the detonator,


    i'm ok , but my pockets melt,
    I got to go downtown and
    weare my proper chain.


    Today is raining paradise,
    and I got to wake up,
    i'll not sign
    the resurrection,
    dig for souvenirs,
    dig somewere,dig deeper,
    dig my own cave,
    dig,dig, thru my starvation,
    hungry bones of rest,
    heavy bags of unsatisfied desires
    of isolation, and my glass overflowing,
    my fuse is short, my hands are uninspired,
    odds in a roulette coming
    from a cold russia,
    dig, drag, drop.
    good bye,white flags.

     
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  2. Alizée

    Alizée ⊙ Humαlıen ⊙ ༻✦༺ ♡ WɩꙆt Aᖾωᥲ ♡ ∞ ֎

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    Carmina:

    Dear friend of mine

    Freedom to travel in a memory,
    go back and deepening,
    go to the top, lavish a little peace and a bit of concern also,
    but it is always better not to remember,
    because standing water infects

    Dig, drag, drop.
    Good bye, white flags.


    An honor to read your lines, thanks for sharing
    Receive my warm greetings and my "lit" smile
    Congratulations!



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  3. Mary C. López

    Mary C. López Una mujer de líneas y procesos.

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    I like your way of writing,
    first intention seems to contain simple expressions,
    however there is a background of deep emotions.
    'll keep your verses, thanks for sharing.

    Kisses
     
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  4. carmina burana

    carmina burana Poeta recién llegado

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    You got me GRACE.....
     
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  5. carmina burana

    carmina burana Poeta recién llegado

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    MARY, deep emotions i still remember that day. kiss you friend
     
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