Why Not?

And you're trying to end
Something that never it began
A relationship
That we wished
But we deny too
Tell me....
If you seems so nice me
If you felt in love with my poetry
Why do you look for excuses
To say just...
"NOT".?

And you're trying to find
The mystery that is hidden
Behind my green eyes...
Is it not obvious?
IT'S LOVE
It's my heart
That beat after beating
Ask you for an opportunity
To give you that love
That you don't want to receive.

And you're trying yourself to excuse
In which someone hurt you already before
And that you don't want that it happen again
You don't want that I hurt you
Neither you want to hurt me
Can't you see it?
I am not as her
Cause I really love you .

If you look at this moon fills that embraces us
In this dashed night
While notes that my eyes
Shed a tenuous tear
For yours nonsenses....
You don't want to hurt me
Because you don't want to be with me
Can't you see?
You've made cry
With that deep...
"NOT"

Not, it is not a river
It is not a sea
They are my tears
They request you only an opportunity
They claim to your lips
The kisses that never you gave me
They seek in your hands
The caresses that so much have I longed
They seek in your heart
That love that I know, is for me
That love that you refused me
That love that wants to leave
Of your injured heart
That it has been denied to return to love

Why "NOT"?
Why, honey?
Why I love you
And you don't you want to love me?
Not all the women are equal
I'm not as the other
I only live for you
I die for you
I see in your eyes
Sigh for your lips
I love you
Just give me
An opportunity...

 

Gran escrito Ingrid para un chico inseguro que te esta haiendo sufrir, pero afortunado por tener tu amor tan incondicional, me gusto en especial la frase a cerca del misterio de tus ojos verdes: amor. Muy buena. Un placer leerte, ahora en ingles.

 

Thank you so much Soren!!! you can find the translation here.... it name is "NO"

See you!

 

....silly...

 

With all respect...... fuck you with your "silly" coments

Thank you

 

Waaaaaaaaaah I'm very angry, who's that boy that doesn't accept you, I'll castrati him and kill him...
appart of this, excelent writing, I love this poem
greetings and a rinoical kiss from here:::hug:::
RINOA:::sorpresa1:::

 

Thank you very much!

See u!

 

Es tu corazon que late despues de latir por que vives solo para el por que lo amas y quieres una oportunidad nada mas una para surgir para renacer de nuevo y yo pienso que el si te quiere amar con tanta muestra de cariño es bello escrito un placer leerte.

 

Muchas gracias x comentar Francisco!!

Saludos!

 

Very nice, I like it, but there are some errors, as in "if you seems" the final s is only used in the third person, present tense, never in the second person.
I like your love for the eyes, they are the mirror of our souls.
On the other hand, a lady with your beauty must not be concerned about blind people that can not see all the goodness of your heart, ¿you know?, forget the bastard you are too pretty to suffer.
My kisses and stars, beautiful work, very nice

 

I like it, but I agree with Felipe, there are many mistakes, they are silly, but make your writing less beautiful.
It's interesting how you share your feelings, I like that!
Cheers!
Take care

Sol.