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Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by Clear, Nov 17, 2019. Replies: 3 | Views: 681

  1. Clear

    Clear Poeta fiel al portal

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    You're almost,
    She is like a old Woman,
    she understand me,
    she knows my heart,
    talking café of your children,
    i learning if she,
    she is strong to me,
    like no one else,
    she defensa my Heart,
    even if ir is the last Thing,
    she has to say.

    Because she knows everything,
    about me,
    with one Word,
    she was protects everything from me,
    and i still think I can see,
    when she was little Girl,
    and took care of her sisters,
    tenderly,
    even in the rooms full of loneliness.

    But the pink pastel colors,
    showed her the way,
    the good angels come dawn,
    to take care of her,
    taking care of her dreams and her destiny.

    And now, you should know,
    have learned,
    you are almost everything,
    i know,
    maybe you're what destiny,
    has giving me,
    to understand this world,
    you're everything since I learned,
    to reason.

    And it's okay,
    sometime the time does'nt
    give us everything that we wanted,
    to live,
    to flay away,
    but you descovered in you,
    how fotos you have to give,
    and you put everything in me.

    And it's okay,
    sometimes time,
    does'nt give everything,
    we need to be happy,
    but you believe in yourself,
    and now i believe much more in myself.
     
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  2. Ulpiano

    Ulpiano Obrero de la Poesía

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    Glad to read other poem of yours, dear friend and poet Clear. I continue suggesting that you don't stop studying English grammar.
    I see that you have made some progress but it's still not enough. And as you say at the end of your poem, that you now believe more in yourself, I hope you will achieve it because your inspiration will be a great help for you.

    Cheer up! and a fraternal hug,

    Ulpiano
     
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  3. Clear

    Clear Poeta fiel al portal

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    I tried to learn more, every day. Thanks. :)
     
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  4. Ulpiano

    Ulpiano Obrero de la Poesía

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    You're welcome. Go ahead. My best wishes with a fraternal hug,

    Ulpiano
     
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