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Haiku´s encadenados

Discussion in 'Foro para Haiku, orígenes y derivados' started by cesarfco.cd, Nov 2, 2009. Replies: 7800 | Views: 262431

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  1. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    No puede seguirse la cadena por no mantener la métrica. Tomo el último para encadenar:

    Somos distintos,
    aun siendo similares
    cada uno es único.    ​
     
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    Cirhian Poeta fiel al portal

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    Cada uno es único
    pétalos del almendro
    entre colillas
     
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    MASTER LY 22 Laly

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    Cada uno es único
    seres irrepetibles
    de mente libre.
    ​
    Realmente siento mucho no haber notado que no estaba respetando la
    métrica poetas. Mis saludos mas cordiales.    ​
     
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    Cirhian Poeta fiel al portal

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    Saludos Cordiales a ti! Yo estaba a punto de decir algo de la métrica, pero mezclo sistemas y suelo olvidarme de las esdrújulas
     
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    De mente libre
    entre colillas vuelan
    tristes plumillas
     
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    Cirhian Poeta fiel al portal

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    (Bravísima!Bang bang, tres pájaros!)



    Tristes plumillas
    polluelo atropellado
    niña de piedra.

    ​
     
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    Niña de piedra
    estatua de manzana
    muerde sin dientes
     
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    Cirhian Poeta fiel al portal

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    Muerde sin dientes
    la bebé ante colinas
    fuentes de leche​
     
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    Cirhian Poeta fiel al portal

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    (El giro de la perspectiva con la manzana, waw... eso ha sido calité)
     
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    Cirhian, Jun 17, 2020
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    Fuentes de leche
    chorrea la desesperanza
    que desayuno
     
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    Cirhian Poeta fiel al portal

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    Qué desayuno
    saqueadas alacenas
    sólo el mendigo
     
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    Cirhian, Jun 18, 2020
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    Sólo el mendigo
    debajo de cartones
    cuenta goteras.    ​
     
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    Cuenta goteras
    entre los demás hombres
    siendo don nadie
     
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    Sinedie, Jun 18, 2020
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    Cuenta, gotera
    anciana de rodillas
    cucú de reloj​
     
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    Cirhian, Jun 18, 2020
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    Cucú de reloj
    entre las frías puertas
    sales pájaro
     
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    Cirhian Poeta fiel al portal

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    Sales y pájaros
    alambique, retorta
    gordos homúnculos
     
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    Cirhian, Jun 18, 2020
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    Gordos homúnculos
    desfilaban silentes
    entre las sombras.    ​
     
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    Cirhian Poeta fiel al portal

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    Entre las sombras
    abeto del crepúsculo
    dos luciérnagas
     
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    Dos luciérnagas
    a plena luz del día
    unas polillas
     
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    Cirhian Poeta fiel al portal

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    Unas polillas
    alacenas abiertas
    montes de arroz
     
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    Cirhian, Jun 19, 2020
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    Montes de arroz
    hurga rata ávida
    sueña ser gato
     
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    Sueña ser gato
    grasa en la palanca
    taller mecánico
     
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    Taller mecánico
    arreglame el gato
    apalancado
     
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    Apalancado
    chicharras del estío
    tumbado el gato
     
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    Cirhian, Jun 19, 2020
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    Tumbado el gato
    huele a la fría rata
    sueña con gatas
     
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    Sueña con gatas
    anciana solitaria
    vela encendida
     
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    Vela encendida
    debajo las sábanas
    roes los fuegos
     
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    Roen los fuegos
    a golpe de manguera
    bomberos sexys
     
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    José Ignacio Ayuso Diez Epicuro y la ataraxia, sin miedos ...

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    Buscan patrón
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