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Haiku´s encadenados

Discussion in 'Foro para Haiku, orígenes y derivados' started by cesarfco.cd, Nov 2, 2009. Replies: 7375 | Views: 229686

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  1. Maramin

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    Más se parecen
    los chimpancés a humanos
    que los gorilas.    ​
     
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    Maramin, Oct 13, 2023
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    Que los gorilas
    estén extinguiendose
    premonición
     
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    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano, Oct 15, 2023
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    Premonición,
    al fundirse los hielos
    se inundan tierras.    ​
     
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    Maramin, Oct 16, 2023
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    Se inundan tierras
    las riberas del rio
    lamen las casas
     
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    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano, Oct 16, 2023
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    *"lamen " las casas
    olas de los barriales.
    Cielo plomizo.

    *Es una personificación.... Hummmm
     
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    GALA GROSSO, Oct 16, 2023
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    Cielo plomizo.
    Las libélulas vuelan
    junto al lago.    ​
     
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    MASTER LY 22, Oct 17, 2023
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    Junto al lago
    entre cañaverales
    álamos altos
     
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    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano, Oct 18, 2023
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    Álamos altos
    entre nubes grisáceas
    un arcoiris.
     
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    LUVIAM, Oct 18, 2023
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    Un arcoíris
    alegría del cielo
    tiempo de lluvia
     
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    Pi-Radianes, Oct 18, 2023
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    Tiempo de lluvia
    en periodo otoñal
    viento y granizo.    ​
     
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    Maramin, Oct 18, 2023
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    Viento y granizo
    cuando nos encontramos
    y no me miras
     
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    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano, Oct 18, 2023
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    Antiguas miras
    pasado trasparente
    veloz gacela
     
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    Veloz gacela
    en la verde sabana
    viene un jaguar
     
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    LUVIAM, Oct 18, 2023
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    Viene el jaguar,
    se esconde entre las hojas
    sin hacer ruido.    ​
     
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    Maramin, Oct 19, 2023
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    Buenas. No encadenaste, te lo inventaste
     
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    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano, Oct 19, 2023
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    Sin hacer ruido
    las ánimas del bosque
    veloz gacela
     
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    Si te fijas aunque el título es Haikus encadenados , también hay senryû
    Un saludo
     
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    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano, Oct 19, 2023
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    Sin hacer ruido
    en el hueco de un árbol
    come una ardilla
     
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    Come una ardilla
    los carrillos hinchados
    salta una urraca
     
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    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano, Oct 19, 2023
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    Pues el encadenamiento se produce repitiendo el último verso del anterior, si no estás dispuesto a seguirlo no hace falta que participes en este juego.

    [​IMG] ​
     
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    Salta una urraca,
    ha visto algo que brilla,
    un cristal roto.    ​
     
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    Maramin, Oct 19, 2023
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    Un cristal roto
    erosionado del mar
    brilla en la orilla.
     
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    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano, Oct 19, 2023
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    Brilla en la orilla
    la concha de una almeja,
    esa gaviota.    ​
     
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    Esa gaviota
    no deja de graznar
    noche de insomnio
     
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    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano, Oct 19, 2023
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    Noche de insomnio
    el sonido de grillos
    una silueta.
     
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    LUVIAM, Oct 19, 2023
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    Una silueta
    se perfila en la niebla,
    noche de brujas.    ​
     
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    Maramin, Oct 20, 2023
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    Noche de brujas
    un mamarracho loco
    todos escuchan
     
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    Pi-Radianes, Oct 20, 2023
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    Todos escuchan
    la lluvia en el tejado,
    salón de baile.    ​
     
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    Salón de baile
    historia de fracasos
    sopla el monzón
     
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    Sopla el monzón
    en medio de la noche
    relampaguea
     
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    LUVIAM, Oct 21, 2023
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