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I swim in the air I breathe

Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by Flor de agosto, Jan 22, 2024. Replies: 4 | Views: 436

  1. Flor de agosto

    Flor de agosto Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Swimming in the air I breathe I arrive at my destination.
    Like a fish cutting thru particles of its environs to reach the sought-after reefs.

    Not aware of the mechanism that swaddles my surroundings and that enables my existence, I’m oblivious to the medium in which I exist.

    I’m oblivious and indifferent,as if it was nonessential or inconsequential. I take thoughtless steps imagining that I could conquer a degree of change on my own without the involvement of another.

    We are all connected by this empty space that allows for movement, yet creates the illusion of a state of singularity.

    I swim in the air I breathe.
     
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    Flor de agosto, Jan 22, 2024
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    Luzibell Ferreyra Poeta recién llegado

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    ️ ‍ ☄️ Mi línea favorita
     
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    Luzibell Ferreyra, Jan 22, 2024
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    Flor de agosto Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Gracias por la visita y dejar tu huella.
    ¡Saludos!
     
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    Flor de agosto, Jan 23, 2024
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    Ermenegildo Tiraboschi Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Nice piece revolving around the interconnectedness of existence and that one pesky fluid that enables life and movement. I enjoyed that the setting was abstract, focusing on the existential experience rather than on physical location. Interesting read.

    Don Erme

     
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    Ermenegildo Tiraboschi, Jan 18, 2025
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    Alde Miembro del Jurado/Amante apasionado Staff Member Miembro del JURADO DE LA MUSA

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    Sometimes indifference is part of our essence, and even more so, of our conscience.

    Greetings
     
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    Alde, Jan 18, 2025
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