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Two Drops Of Dew...

Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by osis, Jul 31, 2007. Replies: 5 | Views: 1125

  1. osis

    osis Poeta fiel al portal

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    Two drops of dew....
    onthe flower of your memory,
    two alive tears
    of my pupils to the wind.

    So that their sound to the air
    is like a feeling,
    left of the agreed
    one of a piano to windward.

    Of a boat that sails
    by the full incense sea,
    of aromas monochords
    incendiary and intense.

    two drops of dew...
    two tears to the wind....
    two agreed ones of piano...
    two smooth kisses...
     
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  2. Felipe Antonio Santorelli

    Felipe Antonio Santorelli Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Beautiful, marvelous, you are the best, just one little thing;
    onthe instead of on the, is a mistake.
    the rigth one is the last one, on the, separeated.
    Strawberries kisses
    for you
    from mi.
     
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  3. zahir

    zahir Poeta reconocida en el portal

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    it's a pleasure for me to read this incredible and beautiful words... it's a breath for the soul, an inspirating poem... cute! my 5 stars just for you! congratulations!!! :) see you soon! ...
     
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  4. osis

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    Zahir thanks, by your words, are a pride for my, who this small poem, it likes to somebody. And as not by your stars. An enormous kiss for you.
     
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  5. osis

    osis Poeta fiel al portal

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    I already occurred to dear account friend, but it went an error when keying in it, in any case my but expresivas thanks, and for you, a great great kiss.:::hug::: :::hug:::
     
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  6. Felipe Antonio Santorelli

    Felipe Antonio Santorelli Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    I am here again to give you my 5 stars, kisses.
     
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