Night of the crow

Welcome to the land of crow
the dark moon will shine
when humanity is burning to die
demons are dancing around the fire
and we're bringing the corpses
thousands of mutilated bodies
thousands of tears falling
from their eyes

Happiness it’s harmless
out here we are the kings and queens
the night our kingdom
your heart our treasure
and your blood our wine
so, you can scream
pray to your god now
because you’ll die tonight​

 

Dominas el ingles muy bien, te felicito. Tu poema tiene mucha fuerza y presenta imagenes bien logradas, muy bueno.
Mis cinco estrellas poeta, compatriota quizas hasta pariente jajaja.
Un abrazo.
Alaric.

 

Excelent poem, it has a ritualistic cadence. Ominous and dehumanizing threats. Good command of the language!

 

Dark and close to hell...fantastic evil poet
I could understand all this English!!:::banana::: :::sorpresa1::: :::banana::: :::sorpresa1::: :::banana::: :::sorpresa1:::
That's for me a personal triumph because I foud really difficult reading Alaric, the vocabulary is quite complicated and searched carefully, you know, it's better and clearier to write in an easy and simple English, I encourage all of you to do it because then Rinoa will read completely all the poemsssssssss in the earth
Thanks xD for the first poem I understood from top to button
(Well done, Rinoa, keep on trying, you're improving your English, good girl, good)
:::sorpresa1::: I just have to say that I'm crazy
In English I'm mad too
:::sorpresa1:::
Jiji
A MADNESS KISS
Rinoaaa!!!:::wub:::


AH! Nice foto

 

I'm so happy for you, but i can say this, you sound (read) like an anime character, and i like that... thanks for read my poem... from the darkness i send you a kiss...

P.S. I'm not good at english but i keep learning (i really dont like english, i prefer japanese)

 

You have the talent to impresss me, this is a great poema....just as dark as your world, as beatiful as your black roses....

Lov U....

thousands of roses for you....and do me a favor...please die...​

 

hai hai... yes of course Mayba... and the same for you... Im gonna miss you here... snif snif... but im so happy 'cause you're one of my best friends... :::blush::: ki wo tsuketene...

kisu kisu kisu bai chai

 

Oh!!!!
It's a creepy poem
I love it
Let me tell you...
you have a really good images here
besides the picture ...
It's GReat
I prefer another lenguages too
Regards
​