Deal

IT’S MIDNIGHT
I CAN’T CLOSE MY EYES
LOOKIN’ AT YOU
FLYIN’ SO FAR.
I KNOW YOU’LL GO SOON
MY HEART BEATS FAST
DON’T WATCH THE CLOCK BABE,
TIME IS MY BAD LUCK.
WHY DON’T YOU BETTER HEAR ME
I GOTTA THING TO TELL YOU
AND I WON’T BREAK MY PROMISE
THIS TIME, I SWEAR
LET’S MAKE A DEAL
IF YOU DON’T GO TONITE
I’LL WASTE CARESSES ON YOU MY DEAR
YOU’LL READ A POEM IN MY EYES.
JUST LET’S MAKE A DEAL.

HELP ME TO BREATH
GIVE ME YOUR HAND
STAY BY ME
SWEET, PRETTY LUV OF MINE.
I REALLY DIDN’T MEANT
TO DO U HARM
BUT WOULD U 4GIVE
THE THINGS I DID WRONG?
WHY DON’T YOU BETTER HEAR ME
I GOTTA THING TO TELL YOU
AND I WON’T BREAK MY PROMISE,
THIS TIME, I SWEAR
LET’S MAKE A DEAL
IF YOU DON’T GO TONITE
I’LL WASTE CARESSES ON YOU MY DEAR
YOU’LL READ A POEM IN MY EYES.
BUT LET’S MAKE A DEAL
SO I DO NOT DIE
YEAH, LET’S MAKE A DEAL
I WANNA B ALIVE
I WANNA B ALIVE.

WITHOUT YOU MY LIFE’S JUST A BIG DOUBT
I SHOUD SAY 4 ME YOU REALLY MEAN TOO MUCH
EVERY TIME I SPEND WITH YOU
I FEEL I LUV YOU MORE THAN I CAN
AND WHEN YOU ARE NOT CLOSE TO ME
HONEY HONESTY I MISS YOU SO
SO TONITE JUST READ MY LIPS
I DON’T WANNA LET YOU GO…

 

"You'll read a poem in my eyes"
Love that line.
Just a thought, a lot is lost in the depth of your poem by writing in slang. I would love to see it in more standard english.
Very nice poem. Till next time friend.

 

Thanks Arana, I promess I'll keep in mind your advice, thank you very much!
I know it's a little late but anyway
MERRY CHRISTMAS and HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!!