maybe tonight

Maybe tonight
I am on your mind,
my voice and the beat of my heart.​

I know you can't see me
But I'm feeling your breathing
undeletable in my head.​

Maybe tonight
a tear will fall from your eyes
and I'll know you're honoring our life.​

I know you're alone
even though the fullness of the saloon
you can avoid de void in your soul.​

Miss me tonight
because I don't know how many nights
I'll be lost in the sky,​

Maybe tonight
our love will die
when you open your heart
to another eyes.​

 

Tremendos estos versos. Melancólico todo este poema. Muy agradable depliegue de sentimientos. Un saludo

 

Nice words..
Kind of reminded me of a nice song
titled also Maybe tonight
from kate of australia...



peace...

 

never heard of it, but I will download it

 

I used to write so many thoughts

 

MAY BE TONIGHT I STAR YOU

 

i likee the last paart very nicee

 

thank you for the kind words

 

Maybe tonight you will meet
maybe tonight you will make it right
who knows what can happen
everything goes.
Stay alert !!!!!
I like your poem, flowing nicely. thank you
I leave the song for my australian compatriote Kate DeAraugo who has a beautiful, lively voice. Hope you enjoyed.
hugs

merche
[video=youtube;E7mz01TeNeE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E7mz01TeNeE[/video]

 

Thank you... beautiful