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My Favourite One

Tema en 'La Torre de Babel' comenzado por Pemberley Winter, 9 de Enero de 2010. Respuestas: 6 | Visitas: 840

  1. Pemberley Winter

    Pemberley Winter Poeta asiduo al portal

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    -My Favourite One-

    You don't need me to pay attention to you,
    You're my favourite one I'll ever look.
    You know how I feel, and that's the most real thing

    We dance together, we smile together,
    No matter how hard could I run...
    You'll always be there by my side.

    I don't know what else to ask for.
    I got everything I asked for.....
    But nothing is so value like you are,
    You're the one who takes care of my little heart.

    You're my favourite person of all,
    The one I can share my dreams, and nights of love.
    You're the guy that can hold me tight, and keep saying to me...
    "you are my heart".

    My beat is your beat, my heart is your heart,
    my breath is your breath...
    No one can pull us apart.

    If you sing, I'll sing.
    [COLOR=purple]If you read me poems, I'll be here.[/COLOR]
    [FONT=Microsoft Sans Serif][COLOR=purple]If I tell you you're my favourite one, you'll smile...[/COLOR]
    [FONT=Microsoft Sans Serif][COLOR=purple]That's something I can't deny....[/COLOR]

    [FONT=Microsoft Sans Serif][COLOR=purple]Maybe they don't understand, maybe they say...[/COLOR]
    [FONT=Microsoft Sans Serif][COLOR=purple]"who are they now"....but we don't care....[/COLOR]
    [FONT=Microsoft Sans Serif][COLOR=purple]We still have each other...and the rest.....[/COLOR]
    [FONT=Microsoft Sans Serif][COLOR=purple]can blow away.[/COLOR]

    [FONT=Microsoft Sans Serif][COLOR=purple]You hold me tight, you're my favourite one.[/COLOR]
    [FONT=Microsoft Sans Serif][COLOR=purple]We will kiss, and the world collapse.[/COLOR]
    [FONT=Microsoft Sans Serif][COLOR=purple]There's no time I can ask for,[/COLOR]
    [FONT=Microsoft Sans Serif][COLOR=purple]don't care where I am, or where I would.[/COLOR]
    [FONT=Microsoft Sans Serif][COLOR=purple]As long as I'm with you. I don't care about anything else.[/COLOR]

    [FONT=Microsoft Sans Serif][COLOR=purple][COLOR=black]-[B]My Favourite One-[/B][/COLOR][/COLOR]

    [FONT=Microsoft Sans Serif][COLOR=purple][B]By Pemberley Winter[/B][/COLOR]
    [SIZE=1][B]I Know what you are....You're gonna be bad for my bussines...I can realize that.[/B][/SIZE]
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  2. RA

    RA Invitado

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    Pemberley

    I am very glad you have written a joyful poem this time. You sound very happy in this poem. It is marvelous when you have a favourite one. Yes, favourite with British spelling, great! It doesn´t matter that the world collapses, your poem is fantastic.
    My congratulations again, dear friend.
    Fraternally,
    Ramiro[/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font]
     
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  3. Pemberley Winter

    Pemberley Winter Poeta asiduo al portal

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    Ramiroooooooooooooo,,,how are you my friend?..It's been a while!...I'm glad you liked the poem..I enjoyed doing it too. Of Course!.favourite with british spelling!!..hahah.
    Keep It Up.
    Pemb :::sorpresa1:::
     
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  4. Redwing

    Redwing Invitado

    [FONT=Microsoft Sans Serif][FONT=Microsoft Sans Serif][FONT=Microsoft Sans Serif][FONT=Microsoft Sans Serif][FONT=Microsoft Sans Serif][FONT=Microsoft Sans Serif][FONT=Microsoft Sans Serif][FONT=Microsoft Sans Serif][FONT=Microsoft Sans Serif][FONT=Microsoft Sans Serif][FONT=Microsoft Sans Serif][FONT=Microsoft Sans Serif][FONT=Microsoft Sans Serif]Ok... the red parts are some grammar mistakes I think I found.
    Well it's a romantic and tender poem, direct and honest. It's good to see a happy pem, I liked the rithm and... i think the message is enough clear to be understood by that one, your favourite one.
    A pleasure to read you as a romantic pem, hugs for you.
    Gooooo peeeeeem. :::sonreir1:::[/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font]
     
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  5. Pemberley Winter

    Pemberley Winter Poeta asiduo al portal

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    Heyy Redwingggggggggg..thanks so much for your comment..is a pleasure to have you here.
    Thanks for the corrections, but in fact, the first correction you made that I believe it was "If you read me poems, I'll be here" to "If you read my poems, I'll be here"....wasn't necessary at all...I wanted to put read ME.
    I 'll be glad if he reads me some poetry. Anyway..thanks for passing by.
    Pemb:)
     
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  6. cesar curiel

    cesar curiel Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Nice poem full of feelings and beautiful words, congratulations, it was a pleasure to read you.
     
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  7. Pemberley Winter

    Pemberley Winter Poeta asiduo al portal

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    Heeeeyy!.thanks so much for your comment Cesar. Nice to have you hear!. I'm glad you liked it.
    Hugs, Pemb :)
     
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