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Who cries for the little boy???

Tema en 'La Torre de Babel' comenzado por german_izquierdo, 13 de Enero de 2007. Respuestas: 3 | Visitas: 807

  1. german_izquierdo

    german_izquierdo Poeta recién llegado

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    Who cries for the little boy
    That never knew a friend?
    Who cries for the little boy
    That works every day?

    Who cries for the little boy
    That never had a hug?
    Who cries for the little boy
    That has never known love?

    Who cries for the little boy
    That is raped every night?
    Who cries for the little boy
    That never had a life?

    Who cries for the little boy
    That cries alone in the dark?
    Who cries for the little boy
    That is inside a man?

    Who cries for the little boy
    That never had to keep?
    Who cries for the little boy
    That cries inside of me?

    Who cries for the little boy
    That walks alone in the dark
    You ask who cried for him?
    I cry for him every night!
     
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  2. A very strong poem in it's content and yes you are right, who cries for those children? Five stars for a delicate melody and it's beauty...

    From Dallas Texas,
     
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  3. poroeta

    poroeta Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Ouch! the structure of your verses is almost perfect, your rime is spotless. I will tell you one thing; boys like that, suffering, living tragedies no human being should bare, are stripped of smiles and showered with tears that erase beauty we'll never witness, and that is a crime we all condone, with our uncaring selfish lives. They cry, you cry, we will all suffer for it. Thank you for sharing, is sad but beautiful.

    Ouch! la estructura de tus versos es casi perfecta, tu rima es sin mancha.Te dire una cosa; ninos asi, sufriendo, viviendo tragedias que ningun ser humano deberia soportar, son desposeidos de sonrisas y bañados con lagrimas que borran belleza la cual nunca veremos, y ese es un crimen que todos aprobamos, con nuestras vidas indiferentes y egoistas. Ellos lloran, tu lloras, todos sufriremos por ello. Gracias por compartir, es triste pero hermoso.
     
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  4. Alaric

    Alaric Invitado

    Follow your heart and you will fly.
    Nice try my friend I applaud your effort, you're in the right direction, keep going.
    Congratulations.
    Alaric.
     
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