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Tema en 'La Torre de Babel' comenzado por Gustavo Cervantes, 29 de Diciembre de 2019. Respuestas: 4 | Visitas: 602

  1. Almost every day,
    from morning to eve,
    you are planning to leave.
    You search in the sky,
    the help from your God,
    to give you the guts,
    to tell him goodbye,
    The reason you said,
    you have faith no more,
    you think he betrayed,
    your trust and your love.
    But when you go home,
    he meets you at the door,
    you look at his face,
    and all you can see,
    is the sweet face you love...
    and you think you hate.
    He offers you a kiss,
    so truthful and soft,
    and with a mellow voice,
    he says welcome home.
    You feel like a fool,
    confused and alone,
    don't know what to say,
    in front of his face.
    You look in his eyes,
    and start to cry,
    but he is always like that...
    he never asks why.
    And then you regret,
    the things that today,
    you wanted to say.
    He will never know,
    the feelings you had;
    the pain in your heart,
    the doubts in your mind.
    Because now you want,
    to commit again,
    just like every night,
    your body and your soul,
    your mind and your heart,
    your dreams and your goals.
    He becomes again,
    the best of your life,
    the man that you love,
    a beautiful thing...
    the greatest of all.

    And he loves you too.
     
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  2. Guadalupe Cisneros-Villa

    Guadalupe Cisneros-Villa Dallas, Texas y Monterrey NL México

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    Gustavo what a beautiful poem, it flows wonderfully, I really like your poetry. In any language, I enjoy reading and the fact that you can keep an idea going is an art...

    Happy New Year!! and may all your dreams come true, I miss our talks, dear friend...I'll be back soon! Keep the light on for me...
     
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  3. Thank you my Darling... how sweet of you... and yes I do wish the same for you.
    light will be on.
     
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    Very interesting, like all the poems of yours friend Gustavo
    She lives locked in a changing world full of uncertainties and it seems that
    it will be very difficult for her to clear her doubts and know what her heart
    really wants . This is a poem that catches the reader from beginning to ending.
    Verses to think, to ponder and to wish the protagonist to find soon what
    for her heart the best is.

    Another big and fraternal hug,

    Ulpiano
     
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  5. Well, thank you.
    Is very nice of you.

    And hugs are always very welcome.
     
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