How I feel.

I'm changing,
my body, my brain,
but I'm still worried
about my friends.

I'm going all my way,
greeting here and there,
I'm special I can tell,
I can sing when you are mean.

I can breath very well,
because my environment
is clean and very safe,
and my neightbors take care of myself.

My heart is as big as the moon,
I,m happy if I see you smiling.
I can't tell you what I feel
within my body when I'm well.​

 

uhhhhh!! exelente sabes que es el primer poema que leo en ingles de mundo poesia....felicidadessss!!!! jeje sabes me caes super..

 

poema sencillo y lindo. bien. pero creo que estaría mejor en el foro dedicado especialmente a poemas de otra lengua. se llama creo, torre de babel
saludos
y nos leemos.

 

Dear Daniela 600:
I think your poem is beautiful,
you must go on
and continue writing
as well as you did in this one.
(I presume you commited three little mistakes, in the words "greetings", "neighbours" and "within"),
Bye, kisses,
edelabarra