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Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by sunny, Nov 14, 2007. Replies: 4 | Views: 1134

  1. sunny

    sunny Poeta recién llegado

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    It is a funny thing the way we met
    We had no plans, we had no date
    We were alone just having fun
    Who would’ve thought love will arrive

    And now you are here in my thoughts
    In my dreams and in my words
    And who would tell you’d be in my way
    Making me, feel love again

    Maybe it is love, maybe it is not
    But I do know I miss you a lot
    I like your ways, I like your style
    And of course, the way you make me smile

    I cannot promise you won’t get a broken heart
    I cannot promise I will not cry
    But, hey, why don’t we give us a little chance?
     
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  2. Olor a lluvia

    Olor a lluvia Poeta asiduo al portal

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    I'd call it: WHY NOT???? jajaja mi Tatis es un primer poema muy bueno, a mi me parece genial, y mucho más con tu inspiración ïn english.... soo good!!!
     
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  3. Francisco Iván Pazualdo

    Francisco Iván Pazualdo Poeta veterano en el portal

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    Yeah, why not a little chance of course you can wait for it don t worry about it that I feel you love her or him well i think you will promise that you don t cry tu amas tu amas it s a nice writing is a pleasure read you.
     
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  4. Salvador Pliego

    Salvador Pliego Poeta veterano en el portal

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    Great I like the way you finish. There is always a chance. Very good job.
     
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  5. oh!. my, my, my..
    Darling..Your absolutely
    marvelous...
    Whatever it takes reach for the sky..

    love
     
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