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Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by denisse, Nov 15, 2014. Replies: 3 | Views: 633

  1. denisse

    denisse Poeta recién llegado

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    I feel so... lost
    There's nothing that I know anymore
    Everything's gone
    Where is my fucking world?

    This sucks, I know
    Haven't you realized what's going on?
    Why are you that far away from me?
    When did we change who we used to be?

    Let me tell you something about me
    I'm not your doll
    Not even a dork that follows you down
    I'm tired of being nice and polite

    Why Can't you see this?
    Are you blind or is just me?
    Why do I accept all you give
    without giving a fuck about me    ​
     
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    denisse, Nov 15, 2014
  2. Lourdes C

    Lourdes C POETISA DEL AMOR

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    It is a beautiful and sad poem. You need to care about yourself. No one can make you happy. If you love yourself others will love you as well. Thank you for sharing your poem. Blessings.
     
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    Lourdes C, Nov 15, 2014
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    DEJAVU Poeta adicto al portal

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    I always enjoy urban poetry, almost slam, yet sensitive! Good read, Thank you!
     
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    DEJAVU, Nov 17, 2014
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    amormejia Poeta veterano en el portal

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    It's intense and to the point. The point is that fairness is always far from where it's deserved. Great poem!
     
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    amormejia, Nov 21, 2014
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