Biblical history

She is the damn one,
the Eva who gave you the apple.
The one that gave birth
to children condemning them to bend their backs
under the sun of the earth.
The one who kissed you and betrayed you.

But you…
You are even worse in history,
well, you always washed your hands.

 

como Pilatos??? Es pecado de omisión??? jjj Buenos versos Danie

 

Obvio... El hombre es como el cirujano: toca los órganos y después se lava las manos. (chiste malo/ se me ocurrió de momento... jajaja)
Un abrazo amigo.

 

Correction.. . Her name was Eve...and yet
she did that indeed. Demn Us all.

 

Danie,
what a great poem, I enjoy it. Indeed, there is wisdom in it;
washing your hands would really help you down the road.

Just like you, I like my English ramblings but
to be honest, I never really thought much about them,
I just knew English has been part of who I am,
even, if I was born in Mexico.

As a young man
I found this language to be horribly ugly then;
now, I find it to be indescribably beautiful
as the one I was born with.

I guess If I now live here and
I depend on this land to provide for my needs,
then, this joy makes me want to occupy my mind
into some English thoughts, shape some ideas and
make out of them some words.

The downside, though, is writing in English
doesn’t make me feel like a poetic man,
but a natural one with long hair,( grrrr ) older as each paragraph grows
and crazier as the moment turns into hours and many beers.

alegres saludos.

fidel.

 

Los versos finales del poema encajan perfectos a tu comentario…


“But you…
You are even worse in history,
well, you always washed your hands.”


Therefore, I do not know what correction you are talking about.

Greetings.

 

I meant "eve" instead of eva... thats it, no swet tho

 

I deem Lilith(Lilitu) gather more spectrum of misery than Eve.As always the semites gaming and driving over the reputation of ancient womens.Indeed the tale of Adam and Eve cames from the sumerian civilization culture.I say Enki enjoyed from life on earth,so we can say that the first sinner is god or one of them.Great poem Dani.Regards at distance.

https://reydekish.com/2013/10/01/el-eden-sumerio/