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Discussion in 'Foro para Haiku, orígenes y derivados' started by Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano, Apr 3, 2019. Replies: 17 | Views: 926

  1. Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano

    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    En las tinieblas
    el sol de tu mirada
    faro de luz
    guía entre el oleaje
    en la cruel vida
    iluminas la senda
    hasta tu puerto, amor.
     
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    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano, Apr 3, 2019
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    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Excelente Chöka nos presentas. amigo Ruben, una forma de las más antiguas en la poesía japonesa.

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    Maramin, Apr 4, 2019
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    bristy Miembro del Jurado Staff Member Miembro del JURADO DE LA MUSA

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    Wow , que bonito ! placer leerte , un abrazo
     
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    bristy, Apr 4, 2019
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    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Otro para ti Bristy.
     
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    Alecctriplem Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Que preciosidad amigo, felicidades.
    Me encantó por completo.
    Abrazos.
     
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    Mary Mura Poeta veterano en el portal

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    Compañero Alonso P.Cano no se mucho de choka pero me agradó lo que leí
     
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    Mary Mura, Apr 8, 2019
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    kique Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Tus ojos guían
    el camino de vuelta
    hacia la paz
    que anida en otra vida
    siempre dispuesta
    a compartirla juntos
    en la complicidad

    Me gustó mucho tu genial descripción amorosa.
    Saludos cordiales
     
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    María Baena Miembro del Jurado Staff Member Miembro del JURADO DE LA MUSA

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    Precioso Chöka Rubén, un placer leerte. Que tengas buen dia
     
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    Ricardo Linares Invitado

    Un bonito Chöka lleno de sentimientos, Ruben Alonso, respetando las normas, mi enhorabuena.
    Un placer pasar por tu obra.

    Un saludo con mi respeto.
     
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    Ricardo Linares, Apr 10, 2019
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    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Gracias, Maestro.
     
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    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano, May 5, 2019
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    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Gracias Alexandra.
    Saludos.
     
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    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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    Gracias mil Mary
     
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    Gracias, un abrazo compañero.
     
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    El placer es mío María, un abrazo.
     
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    Gracias por tan bonito comentario, un abrazo Ricardo.
     
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    Alex. Poeta recién llegado

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    Bonito Choka, poeta. Saludos
    Alex
     
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    Ruben Alonso Pepper Cano Con aire del sur.

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