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Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by Guadalupe Cisneros-Villa, Mar 23, 2022. Replies: 5 | Views: 479

  1. Guadalupe Cisneros-Villa

    Guadalupe Cisneros-Villa Dallas, Texas y Monterrey NL México

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    CONUNDRUM

    Last night the rain came
    tapping against my window
    it reminded me of my dreams.
    The darkness came as well
    in the focus of my own gaze
    I forget, I regret not going
    my own path many years ago.
    Is it too late to restart the trip?
    Then the answer comes
    gliding across the yard
    stumbling in a paper boat
    in the puddles made by the rain.
     
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  2. Ulpiano

    Ulpiano Obrero de la Poesía

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    I feel that you have the magic of turning a CONUNDRUM into a beautiful poem, my unforgettable friend Lupita (Sorry for skipping protocol, but you know how much I admire Lilita and how much I like to use the names she calls her friends)
    You catch the reader, who asks himself the question: "Will I know the answer?"
    You have the answer since when you were a girl, when you played with that paper boat in the rain,whicht for the children, who have fun with it, is one of the best of her enviable childhood.
    You still have time: life begins from the moment you begin to realize your own dreams. Restart your path in your little paper boat: today it has become a huge cruise ship or, perhaps, a powerful ocean liner, which will take you along the paths you have longed for since you began to have the use of reason.

    Another big and fraternal hug,

    Ramiro
     
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  3. Minona

    Minona Poeta fiel al portal

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    Indeed, you have life ahead to restart. Warmest regards
     
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  4. Guadalupe Cisneros-Villa

    Guadalupe Cisneros-Villa Dallas, Texas y Monterrey NL México

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    Maestro Ramiro, ud me puede llamar como mejor le plazca de hecho me siento honrada por sus palabras y confianza. Mil gracias por dejar tan generosa huella en estos intentos de busqueda. A veces tenemos la respuesta en las cosas más sencillas (simple is better).

    Besos de colores hasta su hermoso mundo
     
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  5. Berengario

    Berengario Poeta recién llegado

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    What would this answer be like? "IT'S NEVER TOO LATE" Write it down on the paper boat!
     
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  6. Guadalupe Cisneros-Villa

    Guadalupe Cisneros-Villa Dallas, Texas y Monterrey NL México

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    Gracias estimada poeta por llegar hasta estas letras se aprecia mucho sus palabra y las tomaré en cuenta,
    besos de colores en la distancia
     
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