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Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by Roman Vieira, Sep 26, 2011. Replies: 6 | Views: 682

  1. Roman Vieira

    Roman Vieira El cuervo rojo que te observa en silencio.

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    Creation.



    And I was there at that day

    when we made love and parted half.

    The earth was made from flesh,

    the purity of souls became the sky.



    And I was there at that day,

    staring at your wounds and offering a coat,

    filling and warming your insides,

    giving a new life to make for both.



    You dropped a kiss and made it water,

    the rain came down and fertilized our love.

    I made an oath and then it happened,

    we had a son and life begun.



    I was there and felt its walking,

    you were there and heard his words.

    We both shook as we were happy,

    he was there, the product of our love.



    I remember your eyes beneath the shadows,

    [FONT=Calibri]the blinking lights so cast and pure,[/FONT]

    [COLOR=#000000][FONT=Calibri]and I ,well aware of my condition,[/FONT][/COLOR][FONT=Calibri][/font]

    [SIZE=3][COLOR=#000000][FONT=Calibri]I collided and we made love.[/FONT][/COLOR][FONT=Calibri][/font][/SIZE][FONT=Calibri]



    [SIZE=3][COLOR=#000000][FONT=Calibri]The inexistent became existence,[/FONT][/COLOR][FONT=Calibri][/font][/SIZE][FONT=Calibri]

    [SIZE=3][COLOR=#000000][FONT=Calibri]we made a conscious and developed a soul.[/FONT][/COLOR][FONT=Calibri][/font][/SIZE][FONT=Calibri]

    [SIZE=3][COLOR=#000000][FONT=Calibri]Then with our heart exposed and in the distance…[/FONT][/COLOR][FONT=Calibri][/font][/SIZE][FONT=Calibri]

    [SIZE=3][COLOR=#000000][FONT=Calibri]We made a container, a soul carrier of our love.[/FONT][/COLOR][FONT=Calibri][/font][/SIZE][FONT=Calibri]



    [SIZE=3][COLOR=#000000][FONT=Calibri]And I was there when all that happened,[/FONT][/COLOR][FONT=Calibri][/font][/SIZE][FONT=Calibri]

    [SIZE=3][COLOR=#000000][FONT=Calibri]I was there and held you close,[/FONT][/COLOR][FONT=Calibri][/font][/SIZE][FONT=Calibri]

    [SIZE=3][COLOR=#000000][FONT=Calibri]but then again we reached the silence…[/FONT][/COLOR][FONT=Calibri][/font][/SIZE][FONT=Calibri]

    [SIZE=3][COLOR=#000000][FONT=Calibri]And I was there when we made love and life begun.[/FONT][/COLOR][FONT=Calibri][/font][/SIZE][FONT=Calibri]



    [SIZE=3][COLOR=#000000][FONT=Calibri]-Creation-[/FONT][/COLOR][FONT=Calibri][/font][/SIZE][FONT=Calibri][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font]
     
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  2. susi underground

    susi underground Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Me sobrepasa... en el mejor de los sentidos. Esto es imaginación en estado puro, purísimo deambular encaminado al abismo de los cotidianos quehaceres.
    Glubsssss.
     
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  3. Cuervo4141

    Cuervo4141 Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Good poem of creation . I liked
     
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  4. Pemberley Winter

    Pemberley Winter Poeta asiduo al portal

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    Aweeeee, this was sooo sweet. I like the way you talk about your creation and the way you love that girl. Because if it wasn't for the love you feel, you wouldn't be writing this or at least creating something. good job

    hugs, Pemb
     
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  5. Roman Vieira

    Roman Vieira El cuervo rojo que te observa en silencio.

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    o_O Gracias... es un mega gusto saber que te ha gustado Susi.

    Saludos.
     
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  6. Roman Vieira

    Roman Vieira El cuervo rojo que te observa en silencio.

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    And it's a pleasure to know that.

    Thanks for the reading.
     
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  7. Roman Vieira

    Roman Vieira El cuervo rojo que te observa en silencio.

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    Yeah, I know you think I'm god and I like to talk about "my" creation, but what I can't understand in here is... the way I love that girl? o_O sorry pemby, but I can't find the presence of a girl between the unexistence and the existence on itself... at least not before they collided and created... Yes, life it is XD.

    Jojo, now you're the one that is mistaken miss pemby, 'cause this poem... wasn't meant for a girl or a relation, it was meant to be exactly what it seems, a poem about our own creation (or if I'm god as i think you thought... it would be your creation Xd) Jo, yo said i was creative... but not that kind of a creative to give a name and providing diappers an food XD.

    Kisses pemb... and don't missunderstand, I'm not aiming to become a real romantic yet XD.

    Hugs and hugs until you get purple and cannot breathe.
     
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