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Discussion in 'Poemas Melancólicos (Tristes)' started by denisse, Sep 3, 2011. Replies: 10 | Views: 697

  1. denisse

    denisse Poeta recién llegado

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    What I do if you are not here with me, sharing my feelings with the pillow and crying every night wishing when I wake up you are on my side… but when I open my eyes I have to face the real, you are so far and all just was a dream.

    I can invent a fairy world in my mind where we can be happy while I sleep, but at the end of day I will be lonely and don’t matter how much I love you, over there is your place, you don’t belong to me.


    I want hug you and kiss you, I close my eyes and I almost can feel you... But damn! What hell? I ask to myself the same thing every day. Why you have to be the one who make my life special and give me a sense to be alive?

    Why I need you more than air to feel everything is alright? Maybe if someday the world is crashing down I could feel good if you are here with me, because I can be in your arms at least once.


    The sun can get cold, the sea water maybe could get sweet, but there is something that never change, the love I feel towards you is more important to me that anything in the entire world, you could be sure of that.

    Our situations can change, maybe you get someone special there, or could be me finding someone special, but he won’t replace you… because there isn’t anyone that could be compared with you, I just feel it, but I’m pretty sure of that.


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  2. Rosario Martín

    Rosario Martín .

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    No entiendo el inglés,pero seguramente medio portal sí.
    Echo a volar estas letras y te saludo
     
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    Rosario Martín, Sep 3, 2011
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    mujerbonita Poeta que no puede vivir sin el portal

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    Hola, estoy en las mismas condiciones
    que calor de julio, tendré que traducirlo
    para dejarte un comentario.
    Saludos
    ¡SONRIE!
     
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    mujerbonita, Sep 3, 2011
  4. LuKaS

    LuKaS L'enfant terrible

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    Wonderfull. Me sentí identificado en la situación que planteas . Me deja sin palabras porque es triste y lo triste a veces me deja en un mundo vacío sin sentido. Pero te puedo asegurar que me hizo sentir. Excelente.
     
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    LuKaS, Sep 3, 2011
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    denisse Poeta recién llegado

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    Gracias LuKas!!! ^^, tan lindo, y pues si, las situaciones a veces no son las mejores para enamorarse de alguien, y es mucho peor cuando está lejos, pero qué rayos?? no dicen que el amor le pones alas hasta un cerdo? entonces por qué no enamorarse aunque todo parezca tormentoso?
    :::wub:::
     
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    denisse Poeta recién llegado

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    ^^, No os preocupes por buscar una traducción, yo misma la subiré en unos minutos :D así no pierde su escencia :D
    Saludos, y gracias por leerme
     
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    denisse, Sep 4, 2011
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    denisse Poeta recién llegado

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  8. LuKaS

    LuKaS L'enfant terrible

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    ^^ <3 tu actittud.
    Mis alas cayeron con el último golpe que les dió el amor. Y aún sabiendo que no podré volar, me arrojo al vacío. Tal vez "Noche sin alas" pudiera gustarte.
     
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    LuKaS, Sep 5, 2011
  9. Hate

    Hate Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Read the best story ... My stars for you my compatriot... ImI
     
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    denisse Poeta recién llegado

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    ^^, gracias por leerme Hate!
     
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    denisse, Sep 6, 2011
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    cipres1957 Poeta veterano en el portal

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    Hola. Te recuerdo que poemas en otro idioma que no sea el castellano deben postearse en el foro La torre de Babel. Reglas de MP.

    Gracias y saludos.
     
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    cipres1957, Sep 12, 2011

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