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Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by lordtever, Feb 17, 2008. Replies: 5 | Views: 1029

  1. lordtever

    lordtever Poeta recién llegado

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    It is so hard
    knowing you're so far
    knowing that the distance
    is stronger than time
    and the distance
    makes your heart
    falls apart so hard.

    Brings my eyes
    so sad
    walking trough the line
    that keep us apart
    because, deep in my soul,
    you're still the one.

    And thought those feelings
    will be soon vanished
    your mark will forever be
    undeletable in my heart's wall    ​


    HOPE YOU LIKE IT, I accept any corrections...
     
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    lordtever, Feb 17, 2008
  2. Étoile

    Étoile Poeta recién llegado

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    lovely .....
     
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    Étoile, Feb 18, 2008
  3. lordtever

    lordtever Poeta recién llegado

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    thank you, I beleive that is the mosto short and meaningfull adjective...
     
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    lordtever, Feb 18, 2008
  4. Arana1006

    Arana1006 Poeta fiel al portal

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    I do like it!
    Oh that hateful distance that plagues our existance.
    "Your mark will forever be undeletable in my heart's wall"
    Thats good stuff buddy!
     
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    Arana1006, Feb 20, 2008
  5. lluvia

    lluvia Invitado

    Oh! que cute....deep in my heart you are still the one, that sounds like a love song......to dance to slowly. Muak!
     
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    lluvia, Feb 20, 2008
  6. lordtever

    lordtever Poeta recién llegado

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    thank you girl pal
     
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    lordtever, Feb 22, 2008

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