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Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by silveriddragon, Dec 20, 2024. Replies: 2 | Views: 182

  1. silveriddragon

    silveriddragon Poeta fiel al portal

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    Are your dreams or just an illusion?
    Living in something that you think is real
    But when turn around slowly they are just your creations

    Dreamer,
    You dont need to wake up
    Dreamer,
    It is maybe the greatest plan
    Dreamer,
    It is not a waste
    You will be a part of the great design.
     
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    silveriddragon, Dec 20, 2024
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    Alde Miembro del Jurado/Amante apasionado Staff Member Miembro del JURADO DE LA MUSA

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    You can't stop dreaming, that's what life is about.
    Merry Christmas.

    Greetings
     
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    Alde, Dec 20, 2024
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  3. Ermenegildo Tiraboschi

    Ermenegildo Tiraboschi Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    The idea that reality is primarily a subjective definition has, philosophically, been around for quite a while, and will probably remain current for as long as humankind exists. The poem is written in a minimalist style, and I found it to be a pretty nice read. But there are a few hiccups here and there that perhaps you might want to consider fixing (see below).

    Have a great day!

     
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    Ermenegildo Tiraboschi, Dec 27, 2024
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