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Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by Guerrion, Jan 22, 2020. Replies: 10 | Views: 730

  1. Guerrion

    Guerrion Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    I have dreamed
    several thousand times about you,
    this, however, is not the only way
    nor is it the most important since,
    when awake, I work next to you.

    Whatever the cause,
    the night dreams are not as crazy,
    you see; I can either stay sleep and happy
    or awake, but hopeful.

    I want to do sixty nine things
    and I sure wish we could do these together,
    of course, I’ll have to negotiate getting some poetical help, but that’s not a damn problem.

    I kept busy at work, but I wonder
    if I could possibly work as hard if you were not around.

    I am glad you know
    that each day starts good when you smile,
    oh and that perfume..
    oh, my God, you smell so pretty good.!

    Fidel Guerra, Springfield, Oregon, 21, 2020.
     
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    Ulpiano Obrero de la Poesía

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    I congratulate you, dear friend Fidel, for your excellent and romantic poem that I liked so much.

    Another big and fraternal hug,

    Ulpiano
     
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    Guerrion Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Estimado Ulpiano,
    to me, at least one paragraph feels like it, romantic. Occasionally, two paragraphs may feel that way, but that's rare or as the title implies, just like a dream.

    If and when it occurs - a full romantic poem- it causes me complete happiness, also, the joy of raising my hands apart like a priest at mass. I look over my shoulders for someone to share in my rejoice, but realized that there's no one else, just me!

    En verdad, I feel great joy when you visit me and leave such wonderful comments.

    As always,
    Fidel Guerra.
     
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  4. Guadalupe Cisneros-Villa

    Guadalupe Cisneros-Villa Dallas, Texas y Monterrey NL México

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    You take us on a wonderful journey of longing and the desire to be loved. I think we all have those dreams and sometimes maybe they should stay that way, why ruin the magic. A very beautiful poem that I enjoyed reading.

    Hugs and kisses
     
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    Guerrion Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Estimada Guadalupe,
    this is what all the writing is about, a dream, always a journey.
    This is a special poem...it’s not just a new poem, it’s so mucho, mucho más..

    In other words, la bella alludes to my poetic spirit in a way that some days she put words to my poems.
    So, surrounded by her voice, her humble personality and beauty I feel that spirit...but her wonderful scent follows me wherever I go.

    Amiga,
    this is a dream – writing - even if we are aware that’s happening.

    Saludos,
    Fidel Guerra.
     
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  6. I wish I had more then one reaction I swear:p:D... you dog.
     
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  7. Guerrion

    Guerrion Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    no worries Gustavo, dude.!
    still, you can put lots of dots, like this……………..
    just kidding brother, I really love your sincerity or full honesty. Girls love that shit and hypnotic moments like it and words that make them smile. You know what I'm talking about?..

    gracias young amigo Rio Bravense.

    Fidel.
     
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    Guadalupe Cisneros-Villa Dallas, Texas y Monterrey NL México

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    I totally get it Fidel, poetry makes you feel, see and sense even those things that are eluded by the naked eye :cool:
    and I agree with the dreams... I rather keep my muse that a Prince Charming and guys dig that stuff too...sorry I'm being nosy with your convo with Gustavo lol...

    XOXOXOX
     
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    Guerrion Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Hola Guadalupe,
    I had a very busy day, that’s why I couldn’t get back to you as soon as I I would love to.

    So, Dear,
    there’s nothing to worry about joining us in the conversation. I think Gustavo wouldn't mind at all, I hope so.

    I’m please that you share the same vision as we do, that some gals dig it...it’s curious but it makes them feel anew and, of course, they let you know about it with a smile.

    It seems to me that when I do go off into the poetic hills
    I come back happy and calm and clearer in my head,
    just like when I was a young Fidel.

    Abrazos largos y alegres,​

    Fidel Guerra.​
     
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  10. by been nosy is how we learn... and indeed... home boys, home girls... we'r all alike.
    and sometimes we also learn,when no means no.
     
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    Guerrion Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Gus…
    indeed, we learn so much by a simple handshake and lots more as we share ourselves...I agree that the same goes to boys and girls.
    I know I have some tightly set of limits, religious and all, but poetry, music, beer and girls really melt my imagination…and being nosy...pregunton, sometimes it really works...but only if it is nicely done.

    Fidel.
     
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