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Discussion in 'Poemas de Amor' started by Emp, Apr 4, 2019. Replies: 29 | Views: 1534

  1. Emp

    Emp 42

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    una suerte de suspiro en el ocaso
    que anida en las venas
    que inhibe el paladar
    que tuerce las palabras
    que mata las formas
    un cuerpo diminuto
    incendiando el fuego del iris
    para esconder
    comprimir
    y debilitar lo real
    agua que diluye el veneno
    de mi amor silencioso
     
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  2. Darkness.cl

    Darkness.cl Poeta que no puede vivir sin el portal

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    Bella y sensible profundidad en el suspiro de tus versos amigo...
    Un gusto leerte...te abrazo con todo mi cariño...
    Nancy
     
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  3. Emp

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    Gracias!
     
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  4. marquelo

    marquelo Negrito villero

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    y la dedicatoria a la mexicana? :p:p:D:p:p
    Has regresado con bríos, Che... o es q racing campeón te inspira :p
     
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  5. Emp

    Emp 42

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    Cual mexicana Marque
     
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  6. marquelo

    marquelo Negrito villero

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    la del chat :D:p:D
     
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  7. Emp

    Emp 42

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    Jajajajaj vos decís la maifren Ajajja ;)
     
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  8. bristy

    bristy Miembro del Jurado Staff Member Miembro del JURADO DE LA MUSA

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    Directas y agudas letras componen el poema...grato leerte, un abrazo
     
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    Gracias
     
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  10. DESIRE SOLE

    DESIRE SOLE Invitado

    Qué bello, y bien porque un amor escandaloso, hace ruido. Felicitaciones a la musa...
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  11. Emp

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    Gra!
     
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    Lorelizh Beye Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    MAsh enamorao pa donde hehehe, saluditos empo, amore a la mexicana ;)
     
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    Nada que ver... Gracias igual!
     
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  14. MARIANNE

    MARIANNE MARIAN GONZALES - CORAZÓN DE LOBA

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    Del amor al odio, hay un solo paso, me gusta leerte, saludos enzo
     
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  15. Emp

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    Te amodio..? Jaaaa
     
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    MARIANNE MARIAN GONZALES - CORAZÓN DE LOBA

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    seeeeeee
     
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  17. eunice salvaje

    eunice salvaje Invitado

    Es corto, pero muy bonito. Saludos!
     
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  18. Emp

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    Gracias por comentar
     
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  19. DESIRE SOLE

    DESIRE SOLE Invitado

    CI
    CIAS
     
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  20. GEORTRIZIA

    GEORTRIZIA ♥Niña de los besos rosas♥

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    hay!! cosiwis!! :p
     
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    Graciwis!
     
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  22. Pincoya76

    Pincoya76 Leyenda de mar.

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    Hermosa entrega compañero, un deleite visitar tu obra poética.

    Saludos desde mi orilla marina.
    Felices días para ti Emp.
     
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  23. Emp

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    Hola pinco, muchas gracias :p
     
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    Pincoya76 Leyenda de mar.

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    Felices días y semana Emp!!:)
     
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  25. Guadalupe Cisneros-Villa

    Guadalupe Cisneros-Villa Dallas, Texas y Monterrey NL México

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    Estupendo! tiene ese "algo" que hace un hermoso poema.

    Abrazos de colores desde mi charca,
     
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  26. DESIRE SOLE

    DESIRE SOLE Invitado

    De nuevo, me gustó tu poema, pero hoy el día está nublado, y ahora que veo éste poema empiezo a auto-disuadirme de escribir poemas realistas, ?¡¡¡¡?¡?¡¡?¡?¡:confused::eek::oops::(o_O, han de ser las nubes.
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    Hasta las llamas son diferentes ahora. Vamo a moir
     
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  27. Emp

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    Haré puemas
     
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    TARDE GRIS Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Dulces versos de amor nos comparte,
    un placer leerlos, saludos cordiales.
     
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  29. DESIRE SOLE

    DESIRE SOLE Invitado

    Oh
    ohhhhhhhhhh gran maestro de la puesía, innvocarás al espíritu del amor perpetuo, for ever and ever,
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    Ajaajaa deja de espiarme
     
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