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Eternal Romance

Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by Lord Vélfragor, Feb 4, 2009. Replies: 3 | Views: 856

  1. Lord Vélfragor

    Lord Vélfragor Poeta adicto al portal

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    I left my moon steal my night,
    I filled with tears the rest,

    And yet the light seems to be my enemy,
    Here among the depths separated,
    between darkness... loneliness for ever,


    The smooth swinging wind,
    One fact among pigsties of distance,
    among the hidden and ambitious without limits,
    without even remember if my memory is what it was,


    Scavenge between the mysteries of hell,
    Hanging medals from the past,
    With a view of grandeur and arrogance at the same time,
    That is how a demon lives ... … as well as live alone,



    With the heart wrapped between flames,
    But at the same time cold as ice,
    soft as the molten silver,
    and hard like diamond,


    Destroy in thousands parts my soul…breaks my memory,
    while only the depth of my pain cover the eternity,
    (Burn the blood in my body! With furious anger!
    Why you leave me forgotten! Why you kill me?)


    The time frame my face the shame of defeat,
    And the passage of time frame to meet again my destiny,

    Loving you… although you do not love me…
    The Outside the imposing your love for Adan…


    To come to leave my ashes… leave my sighs,
    Burials the dagger of your sweetness in the middle of my eyes,
    So there is no more to look at the horizon… only death,

    Sing that song… sea and the river does not stop…
    Remember me because you are not here…
    Detained between my beloved wings…… in my heart!
    Sing for me…


    That all the aspects of fate fill my pain,
    it was the same which has left the shackles on my flesh,
    it has been that has left me breathless … and you my savior,
    When the One God forget me into oblivion hell…


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  2. Belu

    Belu Padme

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    This thing of tell us, that this protagonist feels unloved,
    and hurt,
    it's in some way, painfull
    but, I always find love in you,
    the perfects words to hug my heart,
    and that's why some times...
    I catch my self, just for a little moment
    looking for warm places behind yor draw wings.

    Beautifull, thanks.
     
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  3. Doña Myriam

    Doña Myriam Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    I love your music, the songs yoou create, I´m your admirer and hope to taste those lips whom drive me crazy everytime you squeeze them to take some blood and make me part of that pumping life... your proyect, your soul... I love you so much my Lord, I really miss you... my love, my deep love.
     
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  4. JOP PIOBB

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    I think your poem is fine
     
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