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Exquisite

Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by lluviadeabril, Mar 14, 2010. Replies: 5 | Views: 805

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  1. lluviadeabril

    lluviadeabril lluvia & rain

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    Exquisite
    a kiss that lasts an hour
    on the way home
    wrapped around
    your lover.



    Exquisite,
    a look so captivating
    chills claim
    your spine and
    all your body
    heat devour.


    Exquisite
    the moment before
    your touch and
    the one
    right after
    when he’s lost
    control to you
    [SIZE=3]and gives in [/SIZE]
    [FONT=Book Antiqua][SIZE=3]uninhibited.[/SIZE] [/FONT]



    [CENTER][FONT=Book Antiqua][SIZE=3]Exquisite[/SIZE]
    [FONT=Book Antiqua][SIZE=3]waiting for[/SIZE]
    [FONT=Book Antiqua][SIZE=3]each other[/SIZE]
    [FONT=Book Antiqua][SIZE=3]relentless[/SIZE]
    [FONT=Book Antiqua][SIZE=3]lovers[/SIZE]
    [FONT=Book Antiqua][SIZE=3]one for[/SIZE]
    [FONT=Book Antiqua][SIZE=3]the other.[/SIZE] [/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/CENTER][FONT=Book Antiqua][FONT=Book Antiqua][FONT=Book Antiqua][FONT=Book Antiqua][FONT=Book Antiqua][FONT=Book Antiqua][FONT=Book Antiqua]

    [CENTER][FONT=Book Antiqua][SIZE=3]Exquisite[/SIZE]
    [FONT=Book Antiqua][SIZE=3]paired imaginations[/SIZE]
    [FONT=Book Antiqua][SIZE=3]running rampantly[/SIZE]
    [FONT=Book Antiqua][SIZE=3]wild.[/SIZE][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/CENTER][FONT=Book Antiqua][FONT=Book Antiqua][FONT=Book Antiqua][FONT=Book Antiqua]




    [RIGHT](Inspired by Pem's wonderful comment, thanks Pem)[/RIGHT][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font]
     
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  2. Pemberley Winter

    Pemberley Winter Poeta asiduo al portal

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    Dear April Rain,
    Yes!, Exquist. This poem was exquist!, And I'm very grateful for this poem, and more pleased because your inspiration was my comment.
    Count for me for everything giiirll!.
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  3. RA

    RA Invitado

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    Dear friend " April Rain",
    I am a witness of your facility to write a gorgeous poem from a verse and/or a commentary. This poem is a wonderful sample of it. We, at this site, are completely satisfied since we have an inspired poet who shares her literary productions with us. Go on, dear friend, and continue offering this pleasure to your readers and admirers.
    A fraternal hug,
    Ramiro[/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font]
     
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  4. lluviadeabril

    lluviadeabril lluvia & rain

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    You are so very welcome, I'll stop by your poems for more inspiration.

    -A huge hug and thank you.
     
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  5. lluviadeabril

    lluviadeabril lluvia & rain

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    Awe, Ramiro you are always so nice. Coming from you, your comment is very much taken to heart.

    A huge hug from a reader and admirer.
     
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  6. Redwing

    Redwing Invitado

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    You know what's exquisit? This. Your poem has a good rithm and content, i liked the images and flow... i have no words, sorry.
    Pem's a pretty amazing person and now i see that she's a pretty good inspiration :::sonreir1::: keep on like that girls.
    Greetings April.[/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font]
     
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